Fic: "Lit Up" 4/4, Suits, Harvey/Mike, NC-17

Aug 27, 2011 00:28

Title: Lit Up

Chapter: Four

Genre: H/C, slash

Word Count: Roughly 12,000 at current count.

Warnings: Language, overuse of color adjectives, descriptions of a medical issue (epilepsy), graphic sexual content of the slash variety.

Summary: Mike has synesthesia, which turns out to be a blessing, a bit of a curse, and an unconventional way to finally get ( Read more... )

porn, slash, harvey/mike, fic, suits, h/c

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kai19999 August 29 2011, 00:28:35 UTC
Holy, I just got shivers for reading that.

Alright, so I figured since there wasn't a link on your last chapter there wasn't a new chapter yet. But as I went to your home page to bookmark it, I saw it was there and my face just lit up.

To be one hundred percent honest - this is the best fic I've read in the past year or two. And I've read a lot of fics, man. Just... everything was amazing, perfection. That last line gave me shivers. Anyways, I was so glad to find this and read it today and I'll definitely be going back over to read it again in a week or so just because it definitely deserves a reread.

Thank you for writing this glorious fic and sharing it with us C:

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ext_743776 August 29 2011, 02:04:30 UTC
gosh this was so good - thank you for writing it!! and SQUEE an HPOV?! *sits and waits patiently* xo

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jtsbbsps_dk August 29 2011, 22:07:41 UTC
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perfect ending to this fic! I'm SO glad you completed it!!!!

LOVE!!!

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forochel August 31 2011, 16:13:46 UTC
oh, my god. this has been so amazing to read. I hope you feel loads better and -- your being doped up has not affected the quality of your prose at all. this has been lovely and moving and sweet, humorous at bits and DOWNRIGHT SCHMOOPY (which fills me with great great joy) at other bits. I love how, despite the visual focus of mikeross's synaesthesia, the way he perceives the world and its colours is somehow so tactile at the same time.

and this was my favourite sentence: “Oh,” he says weakly, and the sound drifts off like dandelion fluff. that image, oh gosh. I've been interning at a publishing company and this, this fic, has been an antidote to all the rubbish I've been subject to. the way you've crafted this story and your sentences is just lovely, and I look forward to more. ♥

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karen_jk September 1 2011, 01:13:27 UTC
This is so good and so poetic and OMG.

Had to read it fast as have a deadline, but the poetry and the emotions! And the so-beliable happy ending! :)

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