hooooooray for bad puns!!

Jan 16, 2007 16:29

Title:Between a Rock and a Hard Place
Summary: Natsume refuses to share his cake with a starving idiot. A starving idiot with a sweet tooth. ::Natsume.Mikan ( Read more... )

something horny this way comes

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laleia January 17 2007, 04:19:16 UTC
This version is cute, and so is the abridged one! Both have their advantages.

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phrenic_entropy January 18 2007, 07:00:28 UTC
Ba-ning, ba-ning.

The only thing I liked about this version was that it didn't skimp out on the more fundamental details of the one-shot, ie the entirety of the set-up.

But I didn't like how it was written at all.

Meanwhile.

Thank you for reviewing.

You have a special place in my pancreas forever more.

...my heart.

You have a special place in my HEART forever more.

Twinkies and field mice,

ag

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phrenic_entropy January 18 2007, 06:58:08 UTC
Hee. ^_^

Thanksssssssss.

I'm glad you like it.

I was eating cake and reading SnowMirage's ickle ficcy, and then my mind exploded with an idea so profound and sweeping that it was sure to change the face of fanfiction not just in the Gakuen Alice fandom, but OVERALL.

...this is what I wrote instead.

:(

Badgers?

Thank you for reading.

The end.

ag

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peacewish July 2 2007, 05:00:40 UTC
LOL!! And I never use text message acronyms... but that was so funny I almost fell out of bed. And I didn't have to read the explanation, though I'll confess it took a second or two to click. My question: how did Koko come to be wandering around with a pebble anyway? Or did he go find one and then come back? If the setting had been described a little more, perhaps a reference to being outdoors, my brain would not have been so distracted.

In any case, very very very funny. Natsume's thought process - an interesting dichotomy of scorn and lust - was brilliant. I'm new to this fandom so I'm eagerly searching out the quality writers. So happy that I found this!

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