Fic: After the Eye of the Storm

May 07, 2011 20:42

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Felix slunk in the open door.  His keen eyes darted to something glittering in the moonlight.  Sharp pieces were twinkling.  These could wound through soft unprotected skin and he knew to avoid them.  He sniffed and observed that some of the pieces weren’t quite so sparkly.

These pieces were covered in a dark substance which smelled like ( Read more... )

blue cortina, sam/gene, fic

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fern_tree May 7 2011, 23:08:25 UTC
Ooooh! This is marvellous! :D <3

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phyllisdobbs01 May 8 2011, 21:43:29 UTC
Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. There was only ever one possible outcome for me :-)

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phyllisdobbs01 May 8 2011, 21:48:34 UTC
Thanks. Thank you also for your very helpful comments. ;-)

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awabubbles May 8 2011, 02:25:35 UTC
Oh Gene. He would lock some one in a cupboard (and Sam does get off on it ;D ). Loved it, wonderful conclusion!

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phyllisdobbs01 May 8 2011, 21:56:04 UTC
Thank you. Oh yes, Gene would definitely chuck a rival in a cupboard and lock it to prevent interference with his plans and Sam soooo gets off on that:-))

I'm glad you enjoyed it and liked it as a conclusion. I do like it when the boys have a good scrap and I had an idea about that happening, but this time things didn't quite seem to go that way.

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edzel2 May 8 2011, 11:30:49 UTC
Wow, that was HOT! I love that Sam -the oh-so-correct Copper- has such an unexpected secret! The dialogue was great, too. I think my favourite line, though, just has to be "like an overlarge dishevelled cuckoo..." LOL

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phyllisdobbs01 May 8 2011, 22:04:10 UTC
Thank you. It's fun to let a bit of Sam's hidden side out sometimes isn't it. I think he was very much in the moment at the time!

Glad you liked the 'cuckoo' line. I'm not quite sure where it came from - odd things pop into my head at times.

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basaltgrrl May 8 2011, 23:23:45 UTC
Super! Loads of tension, of various types (heh heh), lovely sexin', possessive!Gene, accepting!Sam... yum.

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phyllisdobbs01 May 9 2011, 13:14:12 UTC
Thanks. I can't get enough possesive!Gene and Sam is so besotted with him :-)

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