I really enjoyed this. :) It has an original sort of idea that I haven't read before. I'm not sure if you're English or American, but as a picky Brit, I didn't find one americanism. :D Great work!
first off, thanks for reading. I'm american, but i try hard to minimize the americanisms. this wasn't beta'd, so i'm equally happy that you found none!
again, thanks for reading and especially reviewing. i hope you stick around.
Okay, first, I like Pansy, but I've never much thought about Colin, so I guess making me think about him in the first place was good work. I also like how quiet the whole thing is, and Pansy's vew of Harry and Draco. It's different.
All in all, wonderful work. And aren't you glad we took out the 500 word clause? ;P
You know, I don't have the slightest clue what a bugger is, by definition. But I know it's bad. And I'm taking offense. *takes offense by sticking out tongue*
I know I've read this before, and I thought I'd left a comment, but apparantly I didn't. (Which was stupid of me, because this is a terrific little fic.)
Anyway, yeah -- so this hits just about every good nerve I have. Harry, Colin, Pansy (she fascinates me, I can't say why), Draco, unrequited love/lust, uncomfortable friendships, and most importantly, good writing and excellent characterizations.
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what a compliment, indeed!
first off, thanks for reading. I'm american, but i try hard to minimize the americanisms. this wasn't beta'd, so i'm equally happy that you found none!
again, thanks for reading and especially reviewing. i hope you stick around.
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All in all, wonderful work. And aren't you glad we took out the 500 word clause? ;P
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cheek little bugger.
;)
no one ever thinks of colin.
poor lad.
thanks for reading!
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Anyway, yeah -- so this hits just about every good nerve I have. Harry, Colin, Pansy (she fascinates me, I can't say why), Draco, unrequited love/lust, uncomfortable friendships, and most importantly, good writing and excellent characterizations.
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