This was so good. Like I felt like I was there. Like this just was. . . . wow. I love the part of Kyle's confusion. You stayed true to the story, but added your own spin. At first I thought it was going to be some dirty story of incest. . . no offense, but it turned out to be a story to which I could actually see in the show. SO AMAZING. Wow!
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glad you liked it.
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I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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:)
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That was an especially nice touch, having Kyle try to mentally calculate/predict.
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