First of all: OMG!!! I think that's one of the best PiKame things I have ever read!!!! The whole thing was just perfect. <3 I don't even know where to start.
It was a cold day. The hills were all coated with a large layer of snow, making the surroundings of the small village look like cotton wool fields. Almost idyllic, like a fairy tale land. I love the beginning of this story. It's such a strong picture in my head. The idyllic land, but nothing is idyllic, because everyone has problems, fears and things which makes you sad. Kame is really a cool character. He so loved his brother, and now after he lost him, he takes care about his nephew. <3
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I can understand Pi that he isn't telling Kame about his real name. It really must be strange to meet someone, fall for him, and realize that he carries your brother's heart in him. It really must be a difficult situation.
Small, white, trembling hands moved to his shirt as well, opening the buttons slowly. Suddenly Yamashita started to get nervous and afraid. What was he doing? What would happen when Kamenashi saw his scar. His hands halted and so did Kamenashi’s who was looking worriedly at him again. I really feel with Pi, because he wants Kame, but he knows that everything will come out when he shows his chest to Kame. ><
But I can also understnad Kame, as I said above. When he finds out, he feels betrayed. I totally feel with him. I think I would believe the same. The other knows since weeks who I am, but I don't....but on the other side I would act same as Pi did. >< It's really difficult.
Pi's confess when he meets Kame again is so heart warming. <3 He really tries hard to get Kame back, and in the end both want each
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That was a really sweet story and hot at the end ! Really beautiful. I just loved the way you described theit relationship's evolution. Very very good !!!
I love this fic. First I love Pikame, but I also loved the plot. I also happen to love single father fics--so with that I was hooked. I think it is understandable that Kame was upset at first. But I love how Pi fought for Kame And I love the little details like the Dan taking to Pi right away, loved the letters, and the sexy bit at the end. Well done-- a wonderful fic.:D
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thanks for sharing.
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Sorry, it took me some time to read it. :)
First of all: OMG!!! I think that's one of the best PiKame things I have ever read!!!! The whole thing was just perfect. <3 I don't even know where to start.
It was a cold day. The hills were all coated with a large layer of snow, making the surroundings of the small village look like cotton wool fields. Almost idyllic, like a fairy tale land.
I love the beginning of this story. It's such a strong picture in my head. The idyllic land, but nothing is idyllic, because everyone has problems, fears and things which makes you sad.
Kame is really a cool character. He so loved his brother, and now after he lost him, he takes care about his nephew. <3 ( ... )
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I can understand Pi that he isn't telling Kame about his real name. It really must be strange to meet someone, fall for him, and realize that he carries your brother's heart in him. It really must be a difficult situation.
Small, white, trembling hands moved to his shirt as well, opening the buttons slowly. Suddenly Yamashita started to get nervous and afraid. What was he doing? What would happen when Kamenashi saw his scar. His hands halted and so did Kamenashi’s who was looking worriedly at him again.
I really feel with Pi, because he wants Kame, but he knows that everything will come out when he shows his chest to Kame. ><
But I can also understnad Kame, as I said above. When he finds out, he feels betrayed. I totally feel with him. I think I would believe the same. The other knows since weeks who I am, but I don't....but on the other side I would act same as Pi did. >< It's really difficult.
Pi's confess when he meets Kame again is so heart warming. <3 He really tries hard to get Kame back, and in the end both want each ( ... )
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Really beautiful. I just loved the way you described theit relationship's evolution.
Very very good !!!
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thank you!
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