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pichiruchi

Fanfic: Je l'aime à mourir (ot5)

Dec 26, 2011 23:26

Title: Je l'aime à mourir (I Love Her to Death)
Focus: Cassiopeia
Rating: G
Warnings: kind of.. angsty (?)
Genre: angst (?)
Summary: You notice there are more like you, some in front, some behind, but just like you, right in the middle.

( I Love Her (Them) to Death )

english, fandom: tvxq, fanfic: Je l'aime à mourir

Comments 13

rosedust230 December 27 2011, 06:38:32 UTC

beautiful... thank you. <3

pichiruchi December 28 2011, 02:11:47 UTC

oh no, thanks to you for reading <3

min_skye December 27 2011, 10:47:23 UTC

this is so BEAUTIFUL! i cried buckets...and it didn't help that i was listening to their song while readin this...

pichiruchi December 28 2011, 02:12:33 UTC

thank you! and grab a tissue *offers box* I was listening to theirs songs I wrote this too :(.

rennie_88 December 27 2011, 11:36:55 UTC

ouch.. that really hurt TT and i actually teared up TT i usually almost never cry over writing/fics.. but this was different... *wail* ... it's just so exactly what's in my own mind/heart and i usually cant think about it consciously or i get upset or depressed, but this really struck home and the style and writing is so lovely...and so bittersweet and just painful so that i just wana hug you to pieces <3 <3 huu.. thanks for this, it really touched me TTTT

pichiruchi December 28 2011, 02:15:54 UTC

oh /huuugs you back. this topic is really sensitive for me too. i tried to put everything in my mind with this. thanks for reading <3 /keeps hugging

tamagoo December 28 2011, 10:27:20 UTC

<3 I'm speechless...so touching... <3 <3 <3 I love this, thank you :)

pichiruchi December 29 2011, 02:51:24 UTC

thank you for reading <3

gunfightings December 31 2011, 10:14:16 UTC

Oh my goodness, you are a really talented author! This story is so incredibly beautiful. It is how I feel too, the sadness, happiness, confusion... You expressed it really well and the end result is AMAZING ♥ if You so kindly allow, I spotted some grammar/spelling errors, can I point them out to you?

pichiruchi December 31 2011, 19:16:13 UTC

thank youuu <3 and oh god! yes please!!! I would totally love you if you tell where they are and how to correct them ;_;

gunfightings January 6 2012, 03:26:20 UTC

Ok, this is what i think is best, it's totally no problem if you feel yours is better!if you think i am wrong feel free to correct me!! Thanks again for sharing your fic ♥
Only when you can't see any of them anymore is that you do what best you can think of: building your own path right in the middle. Because that's the best view you can get.
Only when you can't see any of them anymore, you do the best you can think of: build your own path right in the middle. Because that's the best view you can get.

You notice there is more like you, some in front, some behind
You notice there are more like you, some in front, some behind

You found some truths, some lies, some rumors, some things better left unsaid.
You find some truths, some lies, some rumors, some things better left unsaid.

You red light flickers and you alarm. There is no way you're letting it turn off. You'll believe in what goes out of theirs mouths, out of the windows of their souls, in their lyrics only. Your red light flickers and you begin to get alarmed. There is no way ( ... )