Wither naught, precious one

Sep 25, 2012 02:24



Author: pickles_pick

Chapter: Oneshot

Genre: Angst, fantasy, a teeny bit fluff.

Pairing: Byo/Rui, hints of Kazuki/Manabu

Rating: PG-13

Warnings: Uhm...none?

Disclaimer: No, I don't own any of them except for the story idea.

Synopsis: If you wish to save a life, will you dance with the devil to do so?

Written for obscure_jfic august prompt challenge, no 04: Devil.

Also dedicated to ( Read more... )

screw, kazuki/manabu, charu, byo/rui, kazumana, fanfiction

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k435y September 24 2012, 19:16:11 UTC
bwahaha!! kazuki crying randomly is so cute...and funny. XD & it's a bit strange, but i still love zuki x babu's relationship. XD at least towards the ending, manabu doesn't abuse him. lol. & they are so...conniving? lol. rui's gonna slap somebody when he hears the truth, i bet. XD this storyline was...awesome. i think the fics i've been seeing around revolve around devils & demons rather than...the lighter part of things. XD anyway, i'm babbling. D8 sorry. thank you for sharing! =)

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pickles_pick September 25 2012, 10:53:16 UTC
Somehow I thought that Zuki needed to play the role of a joker for a change sometimes and then Bu has to set him straight. xDD

Thank you! Somehow the story...just started coming out on its own so I didn't know if it was alright. ^^;;

Aww~~ its alright, just continue babbling! o^^o Thank you for reading and commenting!! =))

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emi_popcorn September 24 2012, 19:36:00 UTC
Chapters. Chapters! Emi wants this to be a chaptered fic! 0w0
*is in love with the fic*

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pickles_pick September 25 2012, 10:54:30 UTC
Thank you~~~ ^^ I'll think I might write a sequel to this, look forward to it! ^^

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atmosphere_zero September 24 2012, 22:26:17 UTC
Ah, make it a chaptered story XDD I'm curious to find out what happens next, lol. Great story! =D

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pickles_pick September 25 2012, 11:15:25 UTC
Thank you~!! ^^ I'm considering a sequel to it, so do await it~~ ^^

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silveryxdark September 25 2012, 02:25:23 UTC
SGHDFJDFJDKD TWINNIE ;W; This is wonderful and very very good indeed, mm yes demon!Byou! <3 I liked how this wasn't terribly angsty, this was quite well-balanced and the humour between Kazuki and Manabu was adorable. Tsundere Manabu ftw |D

I do wish there was a sequel (maybe not a full chaptered fic, if you can't?) of sorts, just to see how Byou and Rui's relationship develops.

Also I'd like to draw a demon!Byou now. <3

Thank you for this, twinnie. You've done a wonderful job! <3

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pickles_pick September 25 2012, 11:17:30 UTC
I got inspired by Shana from Shakugan no Shana. xDDD

I'm considering a sequel, a nice, short one so it won't be any problem~ the only problem is how its going to come out. xDD

GOGOGOGO~~ go draw~~~ o*u*o

You're welcome~~ hope you're feeling better now!! ^^ * seal hugs*

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cherrylng September 25 2012, 05:10:11 UTC
SKJDHFLKIHF93PHFNKEJNF GOOD GOD LADY, YOU MUST WRITE A SEQUEL OVER THIS. THOU MUST NOT LEAVE THY READERS TO SUFFER OVER SUCH AGONY.

;3;

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pickles_pick September 25 2012, 11:19:08 UTC
I'm considering it! ^^ Please hang in there while I debate with the storyline! ;u;/

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