Comments | pickybitch: Loooong drabble

pickybitch

Loooong drabble

Jul 31, 2009 21:20

( For Sherri )

Comments 10

sylveraven August 2 2009, 06:57:17 UTC

Hey, I've read this fic four times now and haven't reviewed it. So here's a review.

This fucking ROCKED! Oh my God, I love assertive!Illya. Confused!Napoleon was also very cute. Your grasp of their banter is perfect, your characterisation was spot on, and the little bit where Illya licks his hand clean to keep from getting his suit dirty? *melts*

Also, the bit about the nuts at the beginning. Because Illya is not complete unless he's eating something.

You get a sexy Nic Cage icon of approval. This is his approval face.

Please write more?

lgvu August 2 2009, 15:50:01 UTC

In this icon, Napoleon is saluting the writer - bravo! He obviously likes Illya to take charge of the situation.

sw33n3y August 3 2009, 00:26:12 UTC

Yep! Assertive Illyas are go!! And yet MORE evidence of the feline Illya. When he's not slinking or pouncing, he's licking his paws!

nangi_akki August 3 2009, 14:06:18 UTC

Ooooooh - I love Illya in charge! Really enjoyed this. Especially liked the trust you showed between them - how Napoleon tries to think of a "logical" explanation for Illya's behavior.
Thanks very much.

hazelayes August 9 2009, 14:14:47 UTC

I liked that bit too :D 'the logical reason' why your partner just _has_ to put his hands down your pants!

Well done! A great start and very perceptive.