A few more paragraphs for "Hunter, Prey" - basically expanding a 5-second canon scene that I felt could have a nice, creepy atmosphere. That meter-long centipede shimmying up the bough of a tree made me shiver while watching the episode.
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She (Hoshi) never liked the creepy-crazies. That had been the only disadvantage of living in Brazil (which she still considered the best two years in her life). At least the crawlers in Brazil had been small enough so that she could crash them under her shoes. Not a chance with this monster.
I worked on my studies, and also picked out a couple of short flash pieces and polished them and will be submitting them (I will spend tomorrow dithering about where, but I am determined they will go.)
I also wrote a reply to an online discussion about naming characters which may not have been 'real' writing but was long enough for me to say it counts!
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She (Hoshi) never liked the creepy-crazies. That had been the only disadvantage of living in Brazil (which she still considered the best two years in her life). At least the crawlers in Brazil had been small enough so that she could crash them under her shoes. Not a chance with this monster.
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Ideally, I'll give it another read through before I send it off but if not I'm still okay
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Hurrah indeed! Amazing to see what the brain can stil manage in the evening when work didn't leech you dry.
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Yay!
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I also wrote a reply to an online discussion about naming characters which may not have been 'real' writing but was long enough for me to say it counts!
I will catch up on comments soon!
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Online discussion replies totally count.
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Woot!
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