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HEART - Hermione Granger -> Severus Snape - Het (PG)

Jan 29, 2009 16:06

Title: Heart
Author:dari_67
Pairing: Hermione Granger -> Severus Snape
Category: Het
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: I neither own them nor make money from them.

( Severus' Heart )

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Comments 8

lulabelle72 January 30 2009, 12:54:23 UTC

Excellent use of language; the piece really flows well. Almost poetic at times!

And very sweet and filled with longing. Great job! And to think you just picked this part, what, yesterday or the day before? *claps*

dari_67 January 30 2009, 13:16:15 UTC

Oh, thank you :) *blushing*

I get all mushy when it comes to Severus. I think he inspires me.

sunnythirty3 January 31 2009, 04:14:03 UTC

That was very evocative! :)

dari_67 February 3 2009, 04:41:12 UTC

Thank you!

tinytexans February 3 2009, 04:19:01 UTC

Oooooooooo!!!!! I love this!!!!!!

dari_67 February 3 2009, 04:41:48 UTC

I'm so glad :)

I lurves that man!

beffeysue February 3 2009, 23:29:11 UTC

Beautiful words to describe his protected heart and the witch who hopes to claim it. One day I hope he will invite her into his heart.

Very nicely written!
Beth

dari_67 February 4 2009, 03:03:23 UTC

Oh! You liked it! Thank you! Yes, so much of him was a target all his life, he kept his heart for himself, guarded it with his life. I think it is the only part of him he feels is really his, and he protects it.

In my eyes, they always end up together :D