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fic: this constant state of war (charles/erik, pg-13, 3700 words)

Jun 15, 2011 11:15

( this constant state of war )

x-men: first class

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xbeax June 15 2011, 15:43:40 UTC

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MY HEART IS A MILLION TIMES BIGGER AFTER READING THIS. *____*

pidgeoned June 16 2011, 08:58:04 UTC

:D< (that's me clapping)

fro_baby June 15 2011, 16:34:07 UTC

Dear god, I think I have something between stars and hearts in my eyes right now. This was absolutely adorable, I do love domestic fics. But I also love that it's not quite perfect, that Erik's fighting with himself and enjoying the domestic life in spite of himself. Also, your Charles is precious. <333

pidgeoned June 16 2011, 08:59:20 UTC

thank you for reading! i haven't gotten their voices right yet so this is all trial and error. glad you like the fic though! :D

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pidgeoned June 16 2011, 09:00:21 UTC

Can you imagine? Rabbis, probably. Anyway, I'm sorry you had a shitty day. Glad this fic made it better? \o/

angstbunny June 15 2011, 17:26:44 UTC

“People only love for two things: money and looks. If you have neither then you will spend the rest of your life alone.”

LOL FOREVER. Oh, Erik.

Nothing always meant something but with Charles nothing could mean anything.

That's a brill line.

The place was nice, well-lit, and clean.

So this is a clean, well-lighted place? :D :D :D :D

I love your Erik and ADORE your Charles. I HAVE HEARTS IN MY EYES. ♥____♥

SEE? HEARTS. They're SO adorable, and I loved the progression of this, and I love that it's sort of this... everyday moments that wear Erik down, not big gestures or thunderous moments. Just every day, little things. *______*

pidgeoned June 16 2011, 09:01:07 UTC

YES IT IS A CLEAN WELL LIGHTED PLACE. THIS FIC HAS SO MANY REFERENCES I AM WAITING FOR PEOPLE TO PICK UP ON, HAHA. THANK YOU FOR READING! :D

erethesunrises June 15 2011, 18:15:56 UTC

OP here! This was lovely. And wonderful and warm and just so, so fantastic! It's nice having some angst-less fics around this fandom and you really wrote it all so seamlessly. I love how well you developed a rapport between all the characters and kdfjdkglgj my heart is just bursting right now! Charles and Erik were so perfect and I just adored reading it and was happy the entire time. :D

Thank you so much!

pidgeoned June 16 2011, 08:57:40 UTC

HELLO OP I AM GLAD YOU LIKE THIS slkjfdklsj BECAUSE IF YOU DID NOT I WAS PREPARED TO WRITE ANOTHER ONE THAT DIDN'T MEANDER. ALSO YOUR PROMPT WAS BOSS. \o/

erethesunrises June 16 2011, 20:23:00 UTC

CLEARLY YOU SHOULD JUST WRITE ANOTHER ONE ANYWAY. And thank you so much! I think this is my favourite version of these two, they deserve some happiness. :D