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mapiel April 5 2011, 03:51:30 UTC
HOW HAS NO ONE ELSE COMMENTED ON THIS.

HOOOOLY MOTHER OF GOD.

Basically, there are too many feelings and words bursting out of my brain to properly express my extreme love for this fic, but I'll try. This was incredible, and your writing style is b-e-a-fucking-utiful. The characterization and the playing-with-continuity and the inserts and AUGH JUST EVERYTHING was so fantastic.

Thank you for such a heartwarming, expertly-crafted work. :]

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pidgeoned April 6 2011, 09:52:04 UTC
Thank you so so much for reading! I got into this fandom pretty late even though I saw it shortly after it was released, so I was sort of nervous to impose fic upon the Jewnicorn masses especially when it wasn't as well researched character-wise as I like it to be. Uh, tl;dr right there but I am immensely thrilled you enjoyed this. And first comments are love! I've been trying to respond all day but LJ keeps eating my comments. ):

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pidgeoned April 6 2011, 09:53:14 UTC
LOL. I have awkward down pat, I think, because I kind of am, myself. But no, thank you for reading and putting up with 18.5k of nonsense and sheer lullery! Thank you! :D

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salvadore_hart April 5 2011, 04:38:48 UTC
This is absolutely brilliant, I am enamored.
I love, love the characterization of Jesse - just all of it. All of the little bits and the inner monologues about having conversations (in his head) with people and the shirts, and the klepto comment.
That he was brave and that it worked out for them in the end. All the little notes and the age difference and how seamlessly the story flowed.
Seriously, this is just so wonderfully done (all of the metaphors and hidden meanings ~!), obviously I could go on and on :)

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pidgeoned April 6 2011, 09:56:47 UTC
I love this comment. I'm really glad you liked it (the hidden meanings - I tried very hard to work out the e-mail addresses and the usernames and I just went crazy but it was all worth it, in the end.) especially the characterization because half the time I don't even know how to write them (and this is just my second tsn fic so IDRK obviously) Anyway, thank you so much again!

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jcmwrites April 5 2011, 05:19:26 UTC
This story was so realistic. Wow I loved every second of it. And I'm not really a Jesse/Andrew shipper!!!

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pidgeoned April 6 2011, 09:57:37 UTC
BEST COMMENT EVER. I hope you start shipping them soon! And thanks for reading! :) I hope it was worth your time, lol.

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moonlitelupines April 5 2011, 06:21:13 UTC
...these boys may have ruined me. They're just so, ugh, why can't I find a boy like either of them? Life is not far *pouts*

Other than being ruined, I enjoyed this quite a bit, especially the part where they met in RL because lol that's always an interesting experience, to say the least. This was lovely and I wish there was more because I'm a hopeless romantic at heart even if I don't want to admit it most of the time and want them to live happily ever after.

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pidgeoned April 6 2011, 09:59:15 UTC
Lol. I guess this is why we turn to fanfic because a vast majority of boys are, well, boys.

Thank you for reading! And being a hopeless romantic is not something to be ashamed of, it doesn't make you less of a person, and pfft I am one myself. Also I shall think at length about whether or not I should write a one-shot followup, lmaoo. *rubs beard*

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moonlitelupines April 6 2011, 19:46:08 UTC
Do IT!!! That would be amazing!

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