Comments | pidgeoned: fic: swing swing gently (andrew/jesse, rpf, pg, 1600 words)

pidgeoned

fic: swing swing gently (andrew/jesse, rpf, pg, 1600 words)

May 05, 2011 11:54

Comments 14

thatsapplejack May 6 2011, 09:53:02 UTC

I loved everything about this, but especially this: “Whatever it is you’re thinking about doing,” Jesse says, “Do it.” and this: “You kiss like a pervert,” Jesse tells him. You always have some really special lines of dialogue like those that totally take me by surprise in the best way. It's like, they're really realistic, but at the same time so completely specific to your stories. If that makes sense because I cannn't say words anymore haha

WHAT I'M SAYING IS THAT I LOVE YOU AND IS IT OK THAT AM MAKING CREEPY DECLARATIONS OF LOVE? WHATEVER IF IT ISN'T THEN I DON'T CARE~

pidgeoned May 6 2011, 10:22:42 UTC

Okay, um, it is taking me a while to reply to all the comments I've left unanswered but let me just say LOL YOU MAKE ME SOUND SO ~DEEP~ WHEN REALLY I AM JUST ALL ABOUT THE JEWNICORN. D:

I welcome any and all declarations of love and will give back tenfold because LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IS ALL YOU NEEEEED. BUT THANK YOU! SERIOUSLY! I MEAN, dlfkjsl your comments are baws.

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thatsapplejack May 7 2011, 08:07:40 UTC

SEE that just means it's ~inherent~ in you. :)

<3

p.s. I accidentally typed pigeoned instead of pidgeoned trying to find my way back here and had a legit heart attack when it was like "this journal has been DELETED AND PURGED." LEGIT. HEART ATTACK.

luthien_elric May 7 2011, 07:34:26 UTC

ASDF this is so beautiful! Amazing work ♥

happy_braindead May 7 2011, 17:45:32 UTC

Tasdfjkl. I dunno why, out of all of your fics (which i absolutely adore and cherish), this is the one that made the most impact on me. I love the atmosphere that you created; the setting was so ordinary, yet your words made it feel so special, so unique, like a moment that was created just for them that I could totally picture it, them. It made me feel so warm and I don't wanna get out of it. Thank you so much for this!

indecentexposed May 8 2011, 02:14:24 UTC

YOUR FIC IS WHAT MADE ME WANT TO WRITE TSN FIC AND THIS IS EXACTLY WHY. <3333

apintofblood May 12 2011, 15:10:39 UTC

I want to marry this. Literally want to become legally attached to it, til death do us part. YOU ARE FABULOUS.

<3 <3 <3 <3