There is a Place

[pieholer]

Title: There is a Place
Fandom: Pushing Daisies
Pairing: Ned/Chuck
Rating: R
Summary: Chuck dreams of when she and Ned can finally touch; written for pd_playtime April Challenge, Beatles Prompt
Disclaimer: I only own these characters in my thoroughly romantic, yet over-zealous imagination

There is a place
Where I can go
When I feel low
When I feel blue
And

Comments

[ninamazing]

AWWWWWWWWWWWWW. *falls over*

I really liked how you touched upon what we're all thinking -- that they have to overcome this someday, they just have to ... it doesn't bear thinking about otherwise. I love the fantasy bit, too. Ned and Chuck are both experienced, but not with each other, which means the fantasies can be super-rich and super-full-of-longing. :P

I caught three small misspellings you might want to correct -- door jam --> door jamb, salvia --> saliva, envelope --> envelop. Just because I can't help my inner proofreader. *_*

Oooh, also, LOVED this line: Her hips would rise to meet his for maximum impact. Faster. Skin on skin, membrane to membrane, cell against cell. You write very adorable and hot sex, just the way I like it, and I'm looking forward to seeing more.

Cheers!

[pieholer]

Wow-- I can't tell you how much this means to me coming from you!!! I am such a huge fan of your writing. And thanks for the heads up on the typos.

[_bellisima]

This was gorgeous! I loved the image of "garment breadcrumbs" and "membrane against membrane" - so simple, but so evocative!

[pieholer]

Thank you!

[pieholer]

Thanks for your encouragement! This song is from the Beatles' first album and musically it's fairly bad. But when I read the words, this entire story popped into my head! Hey, they said the challenge is still open to latecomers -- so please write your story. I'm having serious PD withdrawal and PD fanfic is the only thing getting me through to ComicCon.

[vyncapervynca]

First of all hun, I'm so sorry about the delay, I have been really busy latelly.

Wow, this story is sweet, hot, a bit sad and millions of things more; I really, really liked it^, I know that always say the same thing but it is because your writing is always great and powerful.

At the door, adrenalin would make his hand tremble so that he couldn’t get the key in the lock.
This, is just perfect dear, I can absolutely imagine Ned trembling at the door.

Great story, hun
Love
Lylou

[vyncapervynca]

Okay, I'm answering my own comment, what surely means that I should be slepping right now cuz I'm sleep deprieved for the last days, but inestead I'm writitng this, so sorry dear for my crappy grammar.

I just read this again and Then Olive had decided she was in charge and started barking orders. he,he... that's so Olive's, I love how you write her.

In the elevator, they’d back into the corner, kissing as the lift sped past the first floor, then the second this is hot and perfect hun.

And the song match great ^_^

Sorry again for the delay hun, good night.
Lylou