Poem

[piercedthrough]

It's a poem, wrote it in grade 10 english class out of some magazines.
I found it lying in my desk drawer.
It's pretty dark, didn't know till it was done :P

Put up everything

Comments

[_prettygirl7_]

deep. :)

[piercedthrough]

Yah, I guess.
It says a lot of things :D, some I still don't understand.
It was like, it's a homework get it done kind of thing

[yourxsinsintome]

veryy good.

[piercedthrough]

Thank you, put lot of time into it.
Well cutting up phrases in magazines, took alot of time

[yourxsinsintome]

i bettt.

[goodasnew]

alright enough of this, move over you sexy emo chicks...time for some constructive input about your poem:

JOHNAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY

i like this man, it's pretty good. i like
Put up everything
The agony of choosing
A new sense of identity

and the last couple lines too. nice work man you're awesome cya tomorrow

[piercedthrough]

Thanks chucky.
It's pretty deep, yeah pretty very deep lol, I think :P