Correction - Part 2

[piggywhale]

Title: CORRECTION (Part 2)        
Word count: 10,653 words (in 2 parts)
Pairing: Ohba
Genre: Drama, Angst, Non-AU & Aiba-centric
Rating: R
Summary: The signs are always there but Aiba never notices.

Note: The story was originally written for the lovely mangamistrezz in arashiawards. Big Thanks to my awesome beta-reader silverdoll14 without whom this story would never end up making

Comments

[cchocoo]

Woooooooow ♥♥♥ I'm so in love with this story!! I totally teared up at the end. There's too little Ohba fics and this one is sooooo good!!
Full of misunderstandings because those two cuties just couldn't speak properly. So much subtlety and I'm a sucker for meaningful glances and stares.
The feelings were so well described and my heart ached for them especially at the last part. Poor Oh-chan T.T Luckily Jun came and punched Aiba and dragged him to Ohno. Although I think both made mistakes it doesn't matter at the end because it all turns out well. And Ohno coming over to comfort Aiba really gave me all the right feels.
This story is a keeper for me :3 I'll definitely go back to this if I feel bad and need some cheering up.
Thanks so much for sharing ♥

[piggywhale]

Heheee... You make me so happy with your comment. I am so glad you really like it. Thank you so much!

I totally agree that these two had problem trying to communicate their thoughts and feelings. They tried, of course, through all the subtle expressions. If it's one of the other members, it probably wouldn't end up this bad. They were lucky that there were the other members to help getting the, back on track. <3

Thank you so much.

[piggywhale]

When I set out to write a story for Ohba Exchange, I had one fic in mind - my most favorite non-AU fic that I hoped I could write something at least resemble that wonderful fic.

That fic was "We've Always Been Together, Haven't We?". Your story.

So you might be able to imagine how awe-struck I was to see your comment on my story. My hands were literally shaking, seriously. I am so overwhelmed by your kind comments. And I am so happy beyond anything that you like this fic. It means so much to me coming from you. <3 <3 <3

[piggywhale]

You are so very kind. Thank you so much for the encouragement. It really makes me want to write more. (It can only be Arashi fic, certainly. I cannot really write any other kinds LoL.) Hopefully, it will be at least enjoyable for you as this one.

Thank you so much again for your wonderful comments. I am always looking forward to reading more of your stories. They always have a special place in my heart.

[mansoura_q]

Ohh God this one of the best fanfic I read... it did really touch my heart and it did convince the massage

[piggywhale]

I am so happy you feel my fic worth such a high praise like this. Really I feel very honored. I am already so glad you read it and are happy with the story. Thank you so much for reading and leaving such comment. Thank you! :D

[rollingday_s]

I was recommended this fic, and while I was reading it I kept thinking: where has this been all my life??

Tennen angst!!!
Let me repeat that.

Tennen.
Angst.If this isn't already the best thing ever, I don't know what is. I love Aiba and Ohno, individually and together, but it's so hard to find fics for this pairing (I'm also guilty of that, of course.) How you managed to make this angsty is beyond me (I was saying "is there even such thing as Tennen angst?" and I was sent here - YES!! There can be

[piggywhale]

Oh... I am so lost in words as how I could possibly reply to your kind and thoughtful comment. At first, I was already very surprised to receive a new comment on this fic since I didn't think anyone would know about it or remember it, let alone referring about this fic when they think about Ohba pairing. I am so thanksful that you were led here and that you loved this story. It means so much to me

[rollingday_s]

Just wanted to say: I'm also a Sakuraiba fan (they're my OTP) and I was so happy to read about them in this way. I just can't put into words what I felt every time I read about the tiny gestures between Sho and Aiba, and how the first would protect the latter when he turned to him for support. And I love that they didn't overshadow the main ship. Everything about them was the icing on top of an already awesome fic, for me.

Thank you again for sharing this <3

[piggywhale]

A Sakuraiba fan! Ah, I am so happy. I always have a thing about protective!Sho. I am glad it came out okay here ☺

Thanks again for your wonderful comment 💕