*insert self here*

Sep 02, 2007 22:20

Sitting around a charcoal fire, he waits. Gently prodding at the coals, turning them to reveal the beauty of the flashing heat, he looks up to the sky and smiles. It's morning. Breathtaking sunrise. He smiles. Looking around patiently, he sees the beauty around him and feels a twinge of pain. "I miss you," he whispers into the slight breeze, and ( Read more... )

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wyllow42 September 3 2007, 12:37:42 UTC
That's fantastic. :)

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piglette3 September 4 2007, 15:35:53 UTC
Wow, thanks :) That means a lot coming from you. I was thinking "It's not like Kristen wrote it, but I kinda' like it" lol

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wyllow42 September 4 2007, 18:13:37 UTC
I love it. :)

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melody1624 September 4 2007, 21:38:22 UTC
Did you seriously write both of those? The poem and the prose?

They're really good. Makes me sit here and hold back tears. I honestly can't wait til I can curl up in God's lap.

But he controls my every breath, my heartbeat is in his hands. And while I'm here, though I'm ready to die for him, he's going to teach me to live for him :)

It feels good knowing that the God who has given you so much peace and happiness lately loves me just as much.

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piglette3 September 5 2007, 04:39:38 UTC
Is that what that is? A prose? lol Good to know ;)

Glad it helped. I like thinking of Him like that.

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melody1624 September 5 2007, 11:55:13 UTC
A novel, a short-story, a sketch...whatever you want to call it :)

But yeah, it is prose. I didn't know you could write.

I'm used to posts from you that go along these lines...
"YEAY CAMPING!!!"

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