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[pikira]

They walked down the street, not too quickly nor slowly, the usual speed that Yamapi had grown accustomed to. They passed the usual streets, entered the usual shops and watched the same people. He saw the older boy smile into window after window and he smiled back. A comfortable routine, the habit that still felt good after all these years.

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[huey_tsai]

that was nice. but it's totally not what i expected it kind of "bended" my mind, and made me a bit confused. but i needed that :))

it was, hmm how should i say it...? very refreshing of some sort? idk really why though.

i loved the way you wrote it, it really flows freely when i read it,

hope to see more of your works!~

[pikira]

<33333 Yay thank you :3 sorry about the confusion ><; I kinda wanted to make the ending a surprise, I guess that's why Xp

[uchihi]

Really fine writings!

[pikira]

Yay thank you <3

[yuyako16]

woaaaah!!!
ryo-chan died?!
and here i am, starting to feel mad at ryo cause he's stealing yamapi away from yuya.
now i feel sad.

really nice work. goodluck!!
hope the two of you would update soon. <3

-goes off to read the next part-

[pikira]

<3 Yay XD
I kinda don't really like Ryo-chan that much in this fic too ;(
Thank you for the comment <3

[yuyako16]

really??
how come?
you're very much welcome!! <3

[pikira]

XD~
Well, He kinda trapped Pi in sometime didn't he.
The most important thing is to move on afterall.
):

[kain_was_here]

....mind aerobics. I love this kind of story. very well written, i like the rythm of it.
( i especially like the feel of 'warmth' in the first section and then the switch to 'cool' in the section after...these random things i notice)

but...D=> seriously! every Ryopi fic i've read in the last few days has envolved Ryo either dying, dissapearing, quitting news.......WTFF AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! *tears hair* its my own fault for finding them. but now i crave fluff (and i hope i can find some that's written as well as this story is)

[pikira]

DDD: -give a hug-
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOUR COMPLEMENT -jumps on you-
But to me Ryo just screams angst .________________.;
AND I was a big fan of fluffy Ryopi too D:

Will try to write another soon <3

[kain_was_here]

Maybe it's his eyebrows.......he can do the most adorable sadface. ryo chaaaaaaaan

[pikira]

Ah I agree XD~ Wriggly Eyebrow love! :D
Demo demo Pi is still my Ichiban ne? ;D