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Darkness Into Day for Kitsunejin

Jun 09, 2012 20:36

Recipient: kitsunejin
Author: derryderrydown
Title: Darkness Into Day
Pairing: Brad/Ray
Word Count: 6,600
Rating: R
Summary/Warnings: Ray visits Brad in Britain. Brad really should have known better than to introduce him to some Royal Marines.

( Darnkess Into Day )

exchange: boys of summer 2012, pairing: brad+ray, author: derryderrydown, rating: r, recipient: kitsunejin

Comments 8

terebi_ko June 10 2012, 08:54:26 UTC

Oh god I think I'm gonna cry. Obviously, reading this fic as the first out of all from this exchange is an excellent choice because, shit, this is Brad and Ray in every perfect way. Love their banter when they're in bed. Also, this line,

"I'm hitting on you," Brad said. "I am definitely hitting on you."

I just cant.

You should write every Brad/Ray in this fandom. Thank you.

kitsunejin June 10 2012, 10:09:38 UTC

OH MY GOD. Oh my god oh my god I don't even know how to deal with this, it is so amazing and so perfect!

I can't even believe how well you've got their voices down, their personalities and their interactions. Ray is so wonderfully, perfectly Ray in this, ugh, I cannot even. Irritating the fuck out of everyone, such a little shit, and so smart, and so brave. And Brad! You got his rollercoaster emotions so perfectly, how fucked up he is - but also how he just takes it and deals with his shit, no matter what. It's awesome, and it's why I love him so much, and ugh. Yes.

"This is not a homophobic bitchfit," Brad said carefully, calmly, "This is jealousy. Extreme fucking jealousy." OH BRAD. He doesn't really have the BEST coping strategies? But it's pretty great ( ... )

dine June 10 2012, 12:05:22 UTC

awesome! loved the terrific Rayness you captured in dialogue, and Brad's honesty in admitting to extreme jealousy over Ray with another guy. the last scene was wonderful in all ways

veronibell June 11 2012, 07:58:02 UTC

I think that this "Hit on him again," Brad said, "and I'll forge the paperwork to get you back in the Corps."

"That is a truly terrifying threat," Ray agreed with a straight face is one of my favourite lines in this! Amazing and Hot fic!

schlicky June 12 2012, 01:55:41 UTC

God, this was fucking fabulous. Just the right amount of want and angst and goofiness. It was utterly perfect. And the voicemail Ray left Brad and the greeting at the end. I don't see how this could have possibly gotten any better. And did I mention that the sex was hot? Because the sex was hot. Thank you. ♥