Afterlife - Ch.6

[pimprevster]

Title: Afterlife - Ch.6
Author: pimprevster
Pairing: Matt/Jimmy
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I do not own the characters, and as far as I know, none of this really happened.
Summary:
I couldn’t stand it. I couldn’t stand the thought of being trapped in an oversized cellar with this demon for any longer than I already had. I couldn’t stand the idea of my

Comments

[aightball]

Amazing.

I love the descriptions in here and you draw the reader in to what the character is feeling. I like how you bring the emotions out in the chapters as well and keep me wanting more.

I did notice one (I think) error: millennium should, I think, be millennia. I'm not 100% sure on that, but for some reason, it struck me as odd to say "millennium".

Otherwise, great job and I can't wait for more!

[pimprevster]

Thank you very much for this comment! I'm glad you enjoy it. ^^

I looked it up and you're right about the millennia thing, so thank you for pointing that out.

[zeevee3]

Coming back and re-reading this at school XD what do they expect me to do when they let me have a laptop all day?

[pimprevster]

:O and share with friends! hahaha. just kidding, only if you have friends who read stuff like this. :]

[zeevee3]

I did ^_^ i showed it to two of my friends who like this sort of stuff and they absoloutely loved it :D

[pimprevster]

Yesss. Accomplishment! <3