The Pineapple Pyjamas Saga

[cherryrainbowie]

Part 2

Summary: It all began when Saul wore one of Dale's t-shirts...... after the freakout....

Comments

[tendaa]

This is really cute and I like the premise, but you should think about getting a beta just to look it over and catch those nagging mistakes that every (new?) writer misses.

I have lots of free time, so, if you would like, I woulnd't mind beta'ing for you.

Send me a PM if you want to take up my offer and I'll send you my email.

:] Tendaa

[tendaa]

*Wouldn't.

Offering to beta and miss that mistake. Geeze, just my friggin luck. ;]

[cherryrainbowie]

yeah that'd be great thanks :) the shameful thing is I have a degree in English with Creative Writing haha!!!! I was more into poetry and script writing

[yourmomlemon]

It's very good! I'm so excited to see there's new stuff posted on this comm! I miss the good ol' days when all of us were on here, obsessed and commenting on every post. It's a good idea to get a beta though, the technical errors in this were its only flaws.

SO CUTE THOUGH! OMG! Sharing the shirt... homophobic shirts... So in-character! ^___^ I'm so excited to read chapter 3! After all, this is my all time favourite OTP.

Thanks for sharin and keeping this comm alive!

[cherryrainbowie]

thanks :D there should be more soon - had a pretty busy week or so, so i'm working on chapter 3, then getting it beta-d lol.

[purityofsin]

Im really loving this story! I need more of this wonderful-ness! haha
Saul is so cute! aww~ I can totally imagine him in those pjs! gahh! so cute! lol

[ceares]

this was very cute. I love the tee shirt thing. Any plans to continue it? I'd love to see Dale's reaction when Saul does confess.

[randysugardandy]

“Well for a start, don’t whack off in the homophobamas like you did in that jack daniels t-shirt, its counter-productive.”

HAHAH I NEArly pee'd XD

this is cute and i loves it.