Title: What he wanted the most
Fandom: KAT-TUN
Characters: Kotatsu (Ueda Tatsuya x Tanaka Koki)
Genre: Romance, angst
Rating: PG-13
Note: This is the first of 5 fanfics part of a challenge with
lady_nymus with 5 words and images selected by
shiharipanda. Translated to english for
hananochikai request ^^
Published at 07.22.2012
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He was walking calmly, despite the rain soaking him. The cold of Tokyo was strong and the rain was freezing it. But he wasn’t caring very much. )
Comments 3
asdfghjklfghhjkl this was cuteeee,very cute♥♥♥
i love everything about it:<3
nice job in pic above,it connect the reader to story before even it starts.
and awesome job in using weather/bar atmosphere for proceeding w/ story...
the bar is warm and fluffy just like koki and rain simulate uepi's feeling...the sadness or loneliness...
omg it is touchy♥
also to hug koki in the most cutest way ever...just go forward w/ your feeling even if it seem so sudden and awkward w/o even thinking of talking/discussing it to someone else...
i find this uepi-like...so uepi-like...
and to fall sleep in the end...so cuteeeee
koki too his kind personality is so his like♥
i'm sucker for angsty fics you know,and you write it the best way♥ wish it was longer tho.
thankssssss for translating it for me♥
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You don't have idea of how much I loved your comment! Thank you so much! ♥
I'm really happy that you loved it! ;;♥
I'm glad you liked the weather/bar atmosphere I did! I wanted to find the very best way to describe such place and the characters feelings. And even more glad that you noted and even described better than me that the bar is like Koki and the rain is like Ueda's feelings.
And that you noted that the feeling to hug was sudden, I'm so happy that you find it uepi-like, and Koki's kind personality ;; I always want to do the most to make the characters like their awesome personalities!
"and you write it the best way♥ wish it was longer tho."
Thank you so much! omg ;; ♥
I hope my text makes sense! And glad I tanslated, because of your wonderful comment <3
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it is new idea tbh,esp in fic...i could clearly imagine it like dramatic movie...
:<3
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