Comments | pink7s: lily.

pink7s

lily.

Mar 12, 2003 04:49

lily had a headache right behind her eyes, and they were the most bothersome of all, she thought, because she couldn't apply pressure to the pain with her fingers like she could if the pain was in her temples or forehead; her eyes would pop out, or something. she lay on the sofa with a cold washcloth over her eyes while the pain thumped so ( Read more... )

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thumbs up! therealsugshady March 12 2003, 13:34:25 UTC

What an ending!

Re: thumbs up! pink7s March 12 2003, 15:43:07 UTC

thanks, muffin. :)

pyleanelf March 12 2003, 14:44:25 UTC

I like it...but maybe I'm slow here, I don't quite get the ending. I love your writing style though, I should read more, but I'm lazy. ;)

pink7s March 12 2003, 15:44:21 UTC

it's okay, i think the story needs a little more work anyway. but i'm glad you took the time to read and comment ... thank you. :)

aliceislost March 12 2003, 16:26:42 UTC

will there be more to it? do post more!

pink7s March 13 2003, 08:51:09 UTC

yes, there will be more. i have the beginning and the end, now i just need to add more of the middle. :)

haelij March 12 2003, 20:10:46 UTC

I think you're brilliant. <3

(By the way - Ignore the plebians who spam your journal with and are too lazy to add the letters "y" and "o" to spell a word correctly. They're not worth your time. ^_^)

pink7s March 13 2003, 08:51:59 UTC

thank you. <3
(i have been ignoring them ... they keep commenting even though i told them not to bother. i delete their comments without even reading them.)