Fanfiction: Swap Our Places (Becker/Jess)

[pink_flame_87]

Title: Swap Our Places
Show: Primeval
Pairing: Becker/Jess
Rating: T
Spoilers:For series 4 up through episode 6 although my version varies from cannon somewhat.
Summary: What if Jess was the one on that pressure pad and Becker had to defuse the bomb? Alternate version of series 4 episode 6.

Author's Note: I've been working on this for way too long. What

Comments

[nietie]

Lovely fic. I especially liked the scenes in the car. They were so sweet and intimate.

[pink_flame_87]

Thank you! I like those scenes as well, watching the episode I couldn't help but wonder what happened before Ethan showed up!

[x_bellaitalia_x]

Gorgeous fic :) Cleverly done, as well.

The scenes in the car, and Jess's guilt over the school girl were particularly good.

[pink_flame_87]

Thank you! I wasn't sure at first if the conversation about Jess's guilt belonged in this fic or I was trying to squeeze too much in. Then I decided the two of them alone in that car was the perfect time for her to get it off her chest. Thanks so much for reading.

[jagnikjen]

Just a tiny nitpick...can you put this behind and lj cut?? Thanks. :)

[pink_flame_87]

I fixed it. I posted this really quickly before work this morning and I must have forgot the cut. Sorry!

[pink_flame_87]

Thank you! I love the idea of Becker just going off and shooting things lol.

[jaynedoll]

That was lovely, it was a really cool idea and I thought you did it really well and had the characters down so well.

[pink_flame_87]

Thanks! I always worry that the characters won't sound like themselves, so that's really good to hear.