Primevalathon Gift Fic:The Things That We Remember part 3 (Becker/Jess)

May 03, 2011 10:59

Title: The Things That We Remember
Author: pink_flame_87
Fandom: Primeval
Characters/Pairings: Becker/Jess
Words: Part 3-1,572
Rating/Warnings: PG very mild swearing
Disclaimer: Primeval and its characters belong to Impossible Pictures. No copyright infringement is intended.
Spoilers: Everything up to the ending of series four.
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deinonychus_1 May 4 2011, 00:16:34 UTC
awwwwww! Yey for the happy fluffy ending with bonus hugging (even if Becker wasn't really in a fit state to enjoy said hugging!).

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pink_flame_87 May 4 2011, 12:32:54 UTC
I am such a sucker for fluffy endings. I can't help it, it's a compulsion. I wanted them to have a good hug in there but I didn't want Becker to just suddenly be miraculously recovered so I just split the difference and had him power through it with his action man pain resisting skills. :p

I hope the whole thing was an enjoyable read. Normally "big misunderstanding" fics drive me crazy, but I thought if it's only a few parts a fic exchange is a good time to try my hand at a cliche (why are they so fun to write lol). Thanks for reviewing!

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torigates May 4 2011, 01:14:13 UTC
SDFJSDFSDJKFKSLSF!!!!!!

THIS IS EXACTLY WHAT I WANTED!!! I so hoped someone would fill this prompt and you've done such a wonderful job, I love it so, so, so much! Thank you for writing it, it is the greatest! The last bit particularly is so great! Thank you, thank you!!!

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pink_flame_87 May 4 2011, 12:36:28 UTC
I'm so glad you liked it! I was a little bit worried when I finished because I realized they really only got one scene together where one of them wasn't unconscious. I just thought the ending fluff would have a higher "awwww" impact if they were apart longer. Anyway, I'm really happy that you enjoyed it. Signing up to pinch hit actually got me motivated to start writing more for this pairing again so I should be thanking you for the prompt. : )

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yavie_namarie May 4 2011, 02:32:32 UTC
OMG, you just killed me stone dead...
*thunk* X_x

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pink_flame_87 May 4 2011, 12:38:04 UTC
*attempts to resuscitate you*

I hope I killed you with an overdose of fluff and not something less enjoyable! : )

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yavie_namarie May 5 2011, 01:31:47 UTC
Lol. Definitely a fluff overdose. I have cavities to prove it... XD

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estel_willow May 4 2011, 18:51:11 UTC
Oh! This was so cute. I really like how the end mirrors the start. I am such a whore for fics that are cyclical in their narrative. <333

I also really love your Lester. His voice was so clear in my head as I was reading it!

*twirls* this is a really awesome fic.

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pink_flame_87 May 4 2011, 19:07:34 UTC
I made someone twirl! Fluff makes me want to do that all the time lol.

I'm glad you liked the way the start and the end tie together, it was one of my favorite parts.

However, I'm REALLY glad you liked Lester's part. That was so much fun to write! I could just picture him glaring disaprovingly while Becker limped around the place.

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sarah_jones May 4 2011, 21:15:29 UTC
That was awesome! I totally loved it! :-)

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pink_flame_87 May 4 2011, 22:26:05 UTC
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

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