:)

[pink_glitz]

Well I had to write a descriptive paper on a "stranger", but since i have a slight social anxiety problem, i decided to write it about patrick but pretend that he's a stranger boy that i followed around the mall. Read it and tell me what you think! (tell the truth too..if it sucks ass, lemme know

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[purrfectangel93]

Um, the second paragraph is a bit long, but besides that, not bad at all. I just wouldn't describe his eyes as well as you have, because you are supposed to be observing him from a distance, so therefore you wouldn't have seen them up close- except for that one moment where he turns around when you sing the lyric- definatlly not enough time to notice his eyes.

Pussy, you should have observed someone you didn't know.

WOW SO COOL

[chythraul]

woh man i sound kind of good looking, too bad im not....

i love you

me

[chythraul]

But chris she is obsessed lol