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May 23, 2011 00:55

Title: You're the one
Author:  /ai-chan
Rating: PG
Pairing:Yamada Ryosuke X Nakajima Yuto
Summary: Yamada is looking for the right person for him..will he find the right one?..

You're the one ( Chapter 1 )

hsj: chinen yuri, fanfic:chapter, hsj: nakajima yuto, pairing: yamajima, hsj: yamada ryosuke

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pink_stitchy May 23 2011, 06:04:54 UTC
yeah i know T__T
hurmm what is beta-reader??(sorry if the question sound stupid)

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pink_stitchy May 23 2011, 06:11:46 UTC
ahh really i don't know that..
where can i find one??

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pink_stitchy May 23 2011, 06:11:09 UTC
ahh that..u know I've been thinking about that also..now that u mention it i will put " for the dialog..thank you for mention it^___^
yes i will use punctuation next time..
thank you so much for your comment, it will help me in improving my writing and arrangement..

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pink_stitchy May 23 2011, 06:27:13 UTC
i will help me??
OMG thank you soo much *HUGS*
it's really mean a lot to me..
okay as soon as i finish with next chapter i will show it to u first ^_____^

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maruupinkiie May 25 2011, 20:40:30 UTC
Waa~~~~~~ I like it sooo much *O* I'll be waiting happy for the nest chapter yaaaay!

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pink_stitchy May 26 2011, 03:36:56 UTC
really???thank you *extremely happy*
Sorry for the messy arrangement of sentence, you know this is my first time writing a fanfic so that's explain why..
But don't worry i already found a Beta reader so the next chapter will be more neat^___^

I will update soon and once again thank you for reading this the comment*hugs*

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sequel please/ :D seyuto October 29 2011, 12:29:58 UTC
hello! do this have sequel already? if yes, where? coz im not good in lj. gomen.. thank you! :D

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Re: sequel please/ :D pink_stitchy October 31 2011, 07:44:55 UTC
Re: sequel please/ :D seyuto October 31 2011, 11:46:13 UTC
ARIGATOU ! :DDDDDD

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Re: sequel please/ :D pink_stitchy October 31 2011, 13:52:44 UTC
You're most welcome ^^

Hope you will enjoy it >,

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audreymusic January 28 2012, 02:49:02 UTC
lol!!
we back dear~!!
#huggies#
no your gramar is ok, and this is quite good starter when it's your first time to write a long story :D
Gonna check the other chappie~~

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pink_stitchy January 30 2012, 18:30:25 UTC
My sweet two little sis are back >,<
*hughback*
Yeah, this is my first long fiction..so it's kind of messy, in many ways..
Please do check out the next chappie, I hope you will like it ^__^

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