Title: You're the one Author: /ai-chan Rating: PG Pairing:Yamada Ryosuke X Nakajima Yuto Summary: Yamada is looking for the right person for him..will he find the right one?..
ahh that..u know I've been thinking about that also..now that u mention it i will put " for the dialog..thank you for mention it^___^ yes i will use punctuation next time.. thank you so much for your comment, it will help me in improving my writing and arrangement..
i will help me?? OMG thank you soo much *HUGS* it's really mean a lot to me.. okay as soon as i finish with next chapter i will show it to u first ^_____^
really???thank you *extremely happy* Sorry for the messy arrangement of sentence, you know this is my first time writing a fanfic so that's explain why.. But don't worry i already found a Beta reader so the next chapter will be more neat^___^
I will update soon and once again thank you for reading this the comment*hugs*
lol!! we back dear~!! #huggies# no your gramar is ok, and this is quite good starter when it's your first time to write a long story :D Gonna check the other chappie~~
My sweet two little sis are back >,< *hughback* Yeah, this is my first long fiction..so it's kind of messy, in many ways.. Please do check out the next chappie, I hope you will like it ^__^
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hurmm what is beta-reader??(sorry if the question sound stupid)
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where can i find one??
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yes i will use punctuation next time..
thank you so much for your comment, it will help me in improving my writing and arrangement..
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OMG thank you soo much *HUGS*
it's really mean a lot to me..
okay as soon as i finish with next chapter i will show it to u first ^_____^
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Sorry for the messy arrangement of sentence, you know this is my first time writing a fanfic so that's explain why..
But don't worry i already found a Beta reader so the next chapter will be more neat^___^
I will update soon and once again thank you for reading this the comment*hugs*
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sorry because I didn't properly tags it..
so here the link for the next 5 chapter
hope you will enjoy it >,<
http://pink-stitchy.livejournal.com/4946.html
http://pink-stitchy.livejournal.com/5129.html
http://pink-stitchy.livejournal.com/5779.html
http://pink-stitchy.livejournal.com/6362.html
http://pink-stitchy.livejournal.com/6517.html
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Hope you will enjoy it >,
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we back dear~!!
#huggies#
no your gramar is ok, and this is quite good starter when it's your first time to write a long story :D
Gonna check the other chappie~~
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*hughback*
Yeah, this is my first long fiction..so it's kind of messy, in many ways..
Please do check out the next chappie, I hope you will like it ^__^
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