Oneshot : Heart a Mess
Title: Heart a Mess
Author:pink_stitchy
Beta :ryokawa619
Pairing: YamaJima, slight TakaYama
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Angst
Word Count: 3,500
Summary: When Yamada was admitted into hospital after an 'accident', Nakajima had taken responsibility as a classmate for sending him note and homework. Little by little he started to drawn into Yamada, even though he knew that Yamada was in ( Read more... )
Author:pink_stitchy
Beta :ryokawa619
Pairing: YamaJima, slight TakaYama
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Angst
Word Count: 3,500
Summary: When Yamada was admitted into hospital after an 'accident', Nakajima had taken responsibility as a classmate for sending him note and homework. Little by little he started to drawn into Yamada, even though he knew that Yamada was in ( Read more... )
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U change your theme
nice! :D
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Yamada kawaisou.....#sob-sob#
I am still awake :/
I can't sleep yet while Nazz already cuddling on the bed #sigh~
The ending is sad!!
Huhu.....
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Omeddeto for the first spot!!
So this is audrey? am I right?
Why haven't you sleep yet?It's already let..
You should get into bed and cuddle next to her >,<
Yeah poor Yamada, he had some kind of problem with himself..
I know it kind of sad, sorry for making you cry..But sometime that how life is..
As always thank you for reading my humble works >,<
Don't stay up so late okay?
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#hug
>_____<
Yamada issues are so complex and drags me into the hole when I read his letter!
You're so good in the letter part :D
live is hard U___U
Yea~ I have to try :/
I am being insomniac these days
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ai-chan is back with new fic
~although i kind of waiting the update for "you're the one"~
but no worries i'll keep waiting, take you're time ai-chan.
this story is so sad.
you make me almost cry. (but not yet)
poor my yama-chan.
ma.. yokata ne
he has yuto.
thanks for the fic.
-btw, nice new layout-
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ah I'm already done with the final chapter of you're the one.now I'm waiting for my beta to finish checking it.so maybe I could post it by end of this week.sorry for making you waiting.
yeah it's sad, I had to admit it myself..
Thank god you didn't cry, because I will felt bad about it.
Yama-chan, he had his own problem. and it was something that he need to confront himself.Yuto is a life saver!! I think Yuto just should run toward the hospital and say to Yama-chan "It's okay you won't drain me out because my love for you are endless. it never run out"..
You're most welcome. I'm soo happy that you stopping by and read this story.Thank you soooo much *hug and kisses*
-thanks, the credit should goes to abbel layout.they got some pretty nice layout there.
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its okay i don't mind about waiting.
and i think you should write the part about Yuto run towards Yama-chan.
it is to demanding if i wish a sequel.
I really loves to read your story. So I will always stopping by and read your story.
Just consider me as your fan, ne. ^__^
*hugs and kiss you back*
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Someone else will write the sequel for this, it's natsu-chan.she really a good writer in fact her work always end with a happy ending..so I will let you know once she done with it.
beside if I do it, I might make another sad ending >,<
ahh I have a fan~~ You just make me cry, because of extreme happiness..
*sob sob*
Thank you~~
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but i ended up reading your fic... XD
the fic is really good.. <33
“Let me in to where only your thoughts are. I want to occupy your mind so that you wouldn’t need to think about the pain anymore. Allow me to pick up every pieces of your heart and put it back together and fill it with my love”
romantic yuto.... <3
Takaki said, Yama-chan loves the pain...
but i think, Yuto can still fix him... >w<
knowing that Yuto's words reached Yamada, there's still a way to make Yama-chan change..... ^^ <3
~making my own sequel again because the fic was left hanging~ XDD
i want a happy ending!! \o/
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Now I felt bad >,<
Thank you for the compliment.I'm afraid people might think it suck, because it doesn't have a happy ending.
Okay let me be honest with you, those line I borrow it from a song >,< since it was my favorite part of that song.
But yeah still, Yuto sound romantic when he said those word.He make me melting~~
I agree with you, he still can be fixed. Look how he open up toward Yuto even tough they were just a classmate.It's a proof that Yuto can save Yama-chan..
ah what about you do the sequel for this one?? just like you did for 'endless ties'. we seem to share the same idea and thought. I sure you will make a great sequel with a happy ending.you see when it's come to sequel I wasn't that good, because it might turned out badly.
I know you might be busy with school, but if you want to, I'm gladly giving you a permission to make a sequel for this, will you?
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don't feel guilty.... :D
it's because there's no yamajima fics nowadays so i'm happy to see this one... :DD
no it doesn't suck.. :D
it's pretty good... :D
i'm imagining yuto saying it, and it's really romantic.... <333
sure2!!
it's my pleasure to write a sequel for this one~~ hoho
it's like, you always end the fic with angst while i end the fic with fluff...
angst+fluff is a very beautiful fanfic... XD
i won't be busy starting next week.. :D
it's our university week so no class the whole week~~ yehey \o/
and classes will end next month... 8DD
and it's summer in philippines!! XD
i can write lots of fics.. XD
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It such a relief to hear that >,<
well I'm happy to make one too..
Yokatta, everyone is asking about for a sequel.you were a life savior*grin*
yeah, it's seem like that. beside your sequel always end with a happy ending and I love it!
It does nee, it was like a perfect combination. first it started with angst and everyone felt sad because it didn't well but then come the fluffy ending which of course that what everyone were hope for..
no classes for the whole week?!! I envy you..
University week??what did you do during that week?
ahh semester break, it just like heaven.
you can stay up as late as you want and wake up in the evening.don't need to attend or think about classes. plus it summer!! surely a heaven for you..
yes you can, in fact you MUST LOL..that's the only time you can spend time dreaming and writing.
My semester break is about to end. My classes will started early of next month >,
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can I demand a sequel??hehehe..
want to see them together or happy for awhile (^^)b
great story~ /two thumb up/
waiting for the next story <3<3
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A sequel?.sure you can. In fact I'm waiting for rin-chan to say 'yes' for my proposal.she always come up with a good and happy ending sequel..so let's hope she will agree with this..
thank you and you even give me two thumb up!!
the next story will be the last chapter of 'you're the one' please looking forward for it.
Thank for stopping by..hug and kisses.
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eh chotto matte, you said it's the last chapter?? Ehhhh~ so fast (><) I really like Ai's stories. You will make other YamaJima stories, right??
/pokes Ai's cheek/
for Natsu (RIN) please make a sequel for this story >/\< #puppy eyes attack#
/hugs and kisses Ai/
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Of course I will!!don't worry I will make another YamaJima stories, it's a promise!
ahhh I'm sooo happy when you said you like my stories, it make me want to write more and more especially YamaJima >,<
guess what?natsu already agree to write a sequel for this..yatta!!! since she always good with making fluffy story I'm sure it will be a happy ending.so let's wait for it okay..
beside she can't say no especially with your puppy eyes attack..
Thank you!!
I love your hug and kiss :)
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natsu(rin) will make a sequel for this one..everyone is asking for it, and she write a better ending (happy ending) than me..
come to think of it, that such a good idea.maybe i will write another sequel with angst ending..
Thank you for the comment and helping me out posting it..
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