Drabble : The 100% Perfect Lover

Mar 09, 2012 03:42

Title: The 100% Perfect Lover
Pairing: Yamada Ryosuke x Nakajima Yuto
Rating: PG-13
Genre:Angst
Word Count: 770

You're the 100% perfect lover for me )

fanfic: drabble, hsj: nakajima yuto, pairing: yamajima, hsj: yamada ryosuke

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angeliquelia March 8 2012, 20:57:26 UTC
Just finish reading "You're the one"
Early in the morning I had already read 2 Yamajima fanfic.
Lucky me.

ahh.. why didn't they met at the ending.
I really don't like angst.

but it still good though.

thanks for the fic ai-chan

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pink_stitchy March 14 2012, 17:08:50 UTC
Another first spot!
Omedetto!!
*HandOveranIceCream*

Gomen, I know most of people doesn't like angst.I don't know what got into me, but lately I've tendency to write an angst.I think I need to stop making too much angst >,<

Come to think of it, I also hate the idea of they didn't met in the end..
Basically this was inspired by a story from my favorite author..I just change the storyline a little bit.If you read the story, it more sad.

You're most welcome, Lia.
Thanks for always being there for me..

p/s:I hope you don't hate ice-cream.But if you does I could change it with cake ^^

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nikasantos March 8 2012, 22:37:37 UTC
wuahhh i studied this story in english ' 100% perfect girl' sonething.... i loved it sooo much and also love how u adapted it to a yamajima couple. i think the real author would love this version ;)

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pink_stitchy March 14 2012, 17:15:38 UTC
ehhh you study Haruki Murakami's work??
Awesome!!!He my favorite author!!
ah the title of the short story is " On Seeing 100% Perfect Girl One Beautiful April Morning"

Wasn't it such a wonderful and breathtaking story?and you're so lucky to have study it in your class.I wish I could attend your class LOL..

ah really??I'm so worry about how other will think about it because I just change it a little bit and make it into YamaJima. So it like I'm copying the stories >,<

hahaha I don't know how thw author would think about this version..he might think I'm just a copycat >,<

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nikasantos April 2 2012, 11:53:44 UTC
Tahahahaha Yeah, but I only studied this story.
We were woinking on short stories, and the impacts ont eh reader and what hw think of it and all that, I had too choose that story because its amazing!!!

I think The author would actually like this, because its adorable...However its sooo sad :'C

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pink_stitchy April 6 2012, 14:16:39 UTC
It amazing right?the story..I even bought the book after I read it online..sometime before I went to sleep I would read it one more time..

hahaha, hopefully he will like it..
Yeah it kind of sad because they didn't end up together..They just passed each other silently and continue with their own life..

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masquea March 14 2012, 18:17:11 UTC
Shpott~
Ari has to come back later and read. ;A;
Ryuu & Taro (my hamsters) are calling meeee to clean their smelly cage~ Dx
SO, BE BACK IN A WHILE~

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masquea March 14 2012, 22:51:33 UTC
WHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAATTTT?!
YUTO, WHAT HAPPENED TO BEING CRAZY AND ACTING UPON YOUR THOUGHTS?! /whacks.

Fuu~ This was so cute and I was thinking, how could this be angst?! ...then I read more...Dx
Although your fic says 'forever' I'm going to believe that they both died (...it's kind of a depressing thought) and met in another time. After all, forever can mean countless things depending on the person, na? :D

/clings to writer-san.
WRITER-SANN~ GIVE ME SOME WRITING AWESOMENESS. Dx

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pink_stitchy March 15 2012, 15:14:53 UTC
It's Ari, right?

Yeah, Yuto you should just stop Yamada and tell him "You're the 100% perfect lover for me".Even Yamada didn't remember you, you just need to make him fall in love with you again.

Come to think of it maybe I shouldn't put 'forever' as an ending. You're right, forever can mean countless things.ahh what a wonderful ending, will you share it with me >,<

Thank you soo much for dropping by and reading my humble works.
*handoverchocolate*

p/s:how your Ryuu & Taro??

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masquea March 15 2012, 15:26:10 UTC
Hai~ Aria, desu~ But people call me Ari cause my cheeks, apparently, resemble those fat things on Dai-chan's face. o__o

Fooey. It's not hard, ne~ Yuto-kun was a super duper awesome smile, I would've fallen for him in seconds. :3

Eh~? But the ending 'forever' gives people freedom of thinking about what happened, ne? So I think writer-chan did I a good job, nonetheless. But I shall still share my ending with you. -u-

Your welcomeee~ /eats. Writer-chan is a good writer, na~ :3

Oh..they're fine..although, they poop way to much. oAo

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rinrin_qq March 14 2012, 20:22:28 UTC
wait,....

eeeeh? why they just passed each other like that? GRAB HIM YUTO! *desperate* He is your perfect match >

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rinrin_qq March 14 2012, 20:25:42 UTC
ups, I didn't use YamaJima icon *use it now* XD

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pink_stitchy March 15 2012, 15:18:21 UTC
Rin-chan~~

You're right, Yuto just should grab Yamada instead of letting him pass by. They were mean for each other, there no doubt about that..Come to think of it, maybe I shouldn't end it this way. They deserve a happy ending!!

As always, thank you soo much for reading this and dropping a comment for me >,<

p/s:Inoo icon is acceptable lol..

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rinrin_qq March 16 2012, 07:05:11 UTC
any plan of sequel? they deserve a happy ending~ *hoping*

Inoo-chan just so adorable for me, I can't help it XD

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yutorin04 March 14 2012, 22:08:44 UTC
will give proper comments later... >.<

but one thing, though i want to make a sequel again am i a sequel maker? XD ....

but the story ended with, "forever" so, i'll just keep the sequel in me.... :3

i'm done reading this actually....
i just need to continue studying... >.<

jaa ne~~ :D

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pink_stitchy March 15 2012, 15:22:38 UTC
You know what, after I wrote this my mind suddenly think of you. I was like "If Natsu read this, she will definitely come out with a sequel"...

Okay I already make some change at the end, so if you want you can make a sequel to this >,<
I always love your sequel!!!

Hai, good luck with your final exam..
I will cheering for you!!!
Natsu, GAMBATTE!!!!

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yutorin04 March 16 2012, 02:58:04 UTC
i'm ain-chan's sequel maker..... X3

i'm now thinking on what sequel to do even though i have one in mind already... xD

here comes the fluff.. xD

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pink_stitchy March 17 2012, 07:59:15 UTC
Yes, you are >,<

You just started your summer holiday right? I'm sure you have plenty if time write a fanfic..

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