[ star trek xi ] Daughter of the Occupation

[whomever]

For the where_no_woman Intergalactic Woman's Day Mini Fic-a-Thon, the prompt being and we strugglin', fighting to eat. Christ I have so much headcanon for this woman there's no way I could fit it all into one story, but I sure tried!

Title: Daughter of the Occupation
Character: Imvi kol-Doval (not!Gaila)
Rating: R
Summary: She is the product of two worlds and

Comments

[hungrytiger11]

Very, very well done. I had never heard of the Koltaari before, and so was glad of the link though in truth, you really conveyed all we needed to know in this story. I was fascinated by this woman's journey, her rejection of self-identity and her denial of other's identity all in reaction to her past. A sad and yet very understandable reaction, really. Thanks for sharing this.

[whomever]

Thank you very much for reading it! ♥

[rubynye]

I am awed by this story. How can it be less than 3000 words, when I've read whole novels with less characterization, vivid description, worldbuilding and complexity?

[whomever]

I was actually super nervous putting it up because A) I admire all the writers (including you!) at where_no_woman so much, and B) I haven't made a concentrated effort to write fiction since August of last year. So thank you, that really, really means a lot! ♥

[whomever]

Aw, thank you so much, Kat! ♥ It's why I should probably play her more. >>

[danahid]

Fascinating, intense characterization and world-building. I am awed by what you've achieved in such a (relatively) small space. Wonderful work!

[whomever]

Thank you very much! ♥

[igrockspock]

Fascinating take on the character!