before the worst

May 12, 2010 00:19

“it’s all your fault,” changmin spits, venom heavy in his voice as he stares at jaejoong.

the shorter man looks at him forlornly, but there’s a lack of regret, of remorse, that picks at changmin like a rose’s thorn.

“changmin-ah-”

changmin slaps him, hard, and wonders if jaejoong’s cheek hurt as much as his own palm. the backs of his eye lids sting.

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fandom: dbsk

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riiche May 12 2010, 18:03:04 UTC
he is dropping to her knees before they can even blink, her knees scraping against the pavement.

her begging is incoherent, choked up and so fucking painful, changmin can feel it in his bones like broken glass.

This makes me want to cry, simply because there are fans who will do exactly that if the day ever comes.

Was a heartbreaking read ♥ I think you captured them so well.

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pinkfluffies May 13 2010, 01:24:47 UTC
i would, not gonna lie. :(

thanks, glad you enjoyed it :3

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quiet_heartache May 12 2010, 20:33:31 UTC
*heartbroken* :(
this business is all so messy, so much hurt and confusion. i just hope they can be happy, whatever happens next

thanks (despite the fresh bout of pain :))

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pinkfluffies May 13 2010, 01:25:24 UTC
hii bby!! :3 how are you/

yeah, i hope they get a happy ending... they deserve one :/

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stage_persona May 13 2010, 00:35:42 UTC
I love it
It hurts, but how could it not hurt?
But at the end, the 5 of them, together, taking care of each other…
I love it

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pinkfluffies May 13 2010, 01:26:08 UTC
it's easy to see, i think; them having each others' backs until the very end.
thanks for reading =)

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cantsaynothingx May 13 2010, 05:00:52 UTC
the last two lines made me...

I don't know what term to use. mixed feelings hit me.

*sobs* *smiles*

seeee? MIXED FEELINGS!

love it ♥

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pinkfluffies May 13 2010, 18:26:16 UTC
=D glad you liked it.
thanks for reading.

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imaginetears May 13 2010, 12:09:49 UTC
/SOBBING

that is so beautiful, but so bittersweet :( just want them to be happy now.

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pinkfluffies May 13 2010, 18:26:29 UTC
=) thanks bby.
me too.

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