WV: Quick Fic: A Lifetime

[pinkphoenix1985]

Title: A Lifetime
Prompt: Ebony or Ivory?
Bonus? yes
Word Count: 100
Rating: PG-13
Original/Fandom: Original
Summary: Eva's life really began, as she glided down the aisle in her ivory dress towards her future husband, Brett.

Comments

[agirlnamedluna]

Not at all what I expected, to say the least, when seeing the topic and your summary! It's a good take on the topic though and you nailed it in just 100 words, almost business-like and to the point, you waste no time explaining but your punch at the end almost sneaks in in the same matter of fact tone. Very well done :-)

[llblckraincloud]

This said a lot in so few words, and I loved all of the images painted in the story. It would be cool to see these scenes all filled out some time. This is just a nice slice of life sort of tale. You did a lot with one hundred words. Great work!

[lostandalone22]

Nice story!