WV: Quick Fic: One Last Whisper

[pinkphoenix1985]

Title: One Last Whisper
Prompt: whisper
Bonus? no
Word Count: 126
Rating: PG-13
Original/Fandom: Original
Warnings (Non-Con/Dub-Con etc): mentions of dying and death
Summary: After years of suffering, it ends in a whisper of one last breath.

Comments

[agirlnamedluna]

How sad :-(
I recognize the feeling though, relief and grief at the same time , and having lost people to suicide, including my mentally ill dad, I know you wait for it and you know you mourn the person you once knew, not necessarily who they are and that is what hurts. Nicely done.

[pinkphoenix1985]

Thank you for reading. Yes, that is what I was aiming for since a week ago tonight, my grandfather after years of Alzheimer's finally passed away. I thought that I would not feel so upset as I have been just because who he was had died years before and he was just a shell of himself. But no, I realize that the finality of the loss hurts just as much as if he had died suddenly maybe even more in a way.

[lostandalone22]

This is really sad.