[onkey] Parental Guidance

[pinkweather]

Parental Guidance
Onew/Key, PG-13, humor
summary: In which a baby is found on SHINee’s doorstep, Kibum discovers the joys of parenthood, and Jinki’s life becomes ten times harder than it already is.
a/n: for hyungdeul, who sobbed because i wrote ontae first. i...am sorry for my fail OTL. ilu!

Key: I want to get married early. I want to have a son that

Comments

[hyungdeul]

i.. don't believe in spotting BUT DAMNIT. SPOTTING. so i can give a long-ass comment later when i'm in school rofl. Yay Onkey!!! I forgot about my homework and all the woes of today upon seeing this gem AAAAA *_*

I LOVE YOU, NED, MY BEAUTIFUL SISTER WHO WRITES DAMN AMAZING SHINEE. I LOVE YOU. ♥

[pinkweather]

lolwat

because of this i didn't do my homework T_T not writing anything for another month okay.

[xxqod]

I really liked it! xD

Jonghyun is always the one getting teased the most (in my opinion) but not that I mind. ^^

Onew and Key are just too cute with the baby ^^

Lol at Minho for saying the baby should be named Lock ^^
reall ROFL'ed at that.

The Ending about the marriage was really awesome xD
Jonghyun = maid of honor! I would like to see that
Minho being flower boy ^^

You really made me happy with this fic!
<3 ~~~

[pinkweather]

...that was fast o.o i'm glad you liked it! xD

jonghyun would ttly be a kickass maid of honor. key shall make him wear pink. lol.

[pinkweather]

omg did you choke for real. i am so sorry. i just thought it was something they'd come up with. the first time i heard their modifiers, i seriously laughed out loud. then i laughed some more when i found out jonghyun chose bling bling by himself.

balancing serious with funny is something i always have a difficult time with, so your comment means so much to me, thank you! *o*

and the thumb-wrestling is done discreetly, yes. they wouldn't want to give jinki more grief than he's already enduring xD

[starclusterxxxx]

xD I'm cracking up!

I was wondering when I would see a fanfic like this.

Anyways, I badly want to quote the WHOLE story, but I won't. x)

“You can always adopt-” Jonghyun makes the mistake of looking down at them. “Oh, ew. Get a room, will you? Not this one-I was here first.” When neither shows signs of hearing his request, Jonghyun stomps out of the room, despairing of the fact that no one ever pays enough attention to him.
>> Jonghyun, when will you get used to them?

“I still want to get married early,” Kibum confides, three consolatory chocolate bars and two boxes of Kleenex later

[pinkweather]

i was sad when nobody ever wrote a fic with this premise after that show came out :( so i just went and wrote one myself, lol.

i had fun writing that scene! i'm glad you liked it.

[314159]

SDFKLSJDLSKDJLKSD CACKLES OH MY GOD I think my favorite part was when Onew tried to make disgustingly cute funny faces at the baby and the baby burst into tears. this was a really enjoyable read, thanks!

[pinkweather]

baby must've cried because onew pulls off cute so much better than it can, haha~

thanks for reading, too!