[OT5] Natural Causes

Apr 26, 2010 17:16

Natural Causes
~8,200 words
OT5, PG-13, AU
summary: They were supposed to bring about the end of the world, but Taemin just had to waltz into the destruction and upset the natural order of things.
a/n: so the prompt for this was captain planet… seriously. clearly my sister enjoys giving me a hard time :\ i don’t think this was the interpretation ( Read more... )

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fillupmyheart April 26 2010, 13:04:06 UTC
*is speechless for ten days

i like the way you incorporated all their personalities into their elements haha.
CAPTAIN PLANET WAS MY FAVOURITE-ST CARTOON EVER
keep up the awesome writing :)

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pinkweather April 26 2010, 15:41:34 UTC
captain planet brings back so many memories of my childhood ♥ cartoons were so educational and morally inspiring back then, lol.

thanks for reading! :)

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hypothermal April 26 2010, 13:23:12 UTC
Whenever I see an OT5 fic I go into fits of happiness, and this is so, so good.

They fit each element perfectly, Jinki is very grounded and yeah fire is the only thing I can ever associate with Kibum, Jonghyun is flighty and yay, Minho for water! Cranky Taemin is so endearing, I adore him.

This makes me so much happier and way more agreeable to do my movie review hoho :D

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pinkweather April 26 2010, 21:55:55 UTC
ot5 fics are so wonderful ♥ they give off such a waffy feeling. people should write more of them o/

i like your description of them; your adjectives are so very apt! tbh i gave water to minho because that was the only thing left /shot. i am just going to cling to the remotest excuse and claim that it is because of his squirtle impersonation 8D ...sorry minho :(

and lol i wish reading fic could motivate me to write my lab reports like that, too~

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intoxicatedbrat April 26 2010, 14:15:22 UTC
chucked into the recycle bin? How is this rubbish, bb???

I ADORE THIS FIC.

I love Captain Planet. I love how each member perfectly fit the element you wrote them into. I love how you portray their characters.

And I'm kinda sorta an environmentalist too. So i love all those Gaia and humans killing our natural resources bit. And i'm a Geography geek, so i went *squee* at seismic waves and tsunamis and volcanoes and tectonics. X)

Aww Captain Planet. We are in need of Captain Planet now more than ever. They should start the series again!

Love this! Awesome job! Mem'ed!!

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pinkweather April 26 2010, 22:05:46 UTC
apparently i am in the minority here ;_;

i just realized that there isn't actually a captain planet character in this fic, oh well! it's cool that you're an environmentalist! whenever i watch green earth documentaries i feel so helpless. like, every single day there's at least one animal species out there that goes extinct because of urban development and industrialization :( we all need to keep our ecological footprints as small as possible!

thank you for your inspiring comment!

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mayuuu April 26 2010, 14:28:11 UTC
Yay you posted it!!! :) oh wait you posted it earlier but yeah it was still locked so

Well...I don't know what to say because I already told you (although I didn't say much, did I) and huhu I can't think of a decent comment right now lol. So yeah, I loved Jonghyun's character the most whatever happened to my bias haha because he's really funny and sweet and...he's just lovable, okay? ♥♥♥ also, he never fails to be Skinship King. *insert dancing banana here* :P

Lol I can't forget Squirtle Minho! When you told me that Minho=water, I immediately remembered him imitating Squirtle =))

I have a lot of favorite parts, so I won't bother to quote them anymore. Seriously, I really liked this fic! So it's hard to quote because I might end up quoting the entire thing lol :))

and even though this is an OT5 fic, I can't help but flail at those OnTae moments hahaha sorry please forgive my bias

P.S.: you're welcome bb! ♥♥♥

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pinkweather April 26 2010, 22:13:30 UTC
yeah everyone should thank you that this post even exists /o/

hohoho mayam! so your real bias is actually jonghyun, huh 8D from what you've told me before, even your subconscious says so! i can't blame you; he really has become a lot more endearing because of hello baby. so even if you'll make onew cry, i agree with you!

yeah, squirtle!minho is going to be my official excuse for why i assigned water to him okay. ty for the random trivia. i keep forgetting stuff like that :D

your ontae radar is so osm /checks back to see what moments you are talking about

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mayuuu April 27 2010, 05:49:34 UTC
Lol I'm flattered hahahaha =))

NOOOOOOOOO!!! Wait I just said I liked Jonghyun's character the most! =)) But you may be right though, that he is more lovable now even though I can't get over his new hair color. First bias never dies, so Onew is still my bias!!! :P though you know how much I love Jonghyun HAHAHAHAHA It's just different with him, okay? Why do I even bother to explain something so complicated =))

You're welcome! Squirtle Minho is cute :3 hahahaha =))

hahahaha sorry can't resist not finding little OnTae in every ot5 fic I read

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lunayeppeo April 26 2010, 14:51:26 UTC
HOW DARE YOU BE SO NINJA

WHY CAN'T I BE NINJA

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pinkweather April 26 2010, 15:03:46 UTC

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lunayeppeo April 26 2010, 15:11:38 UTC
I LOVE YOU WITH THE EARTH OF A THOUSAND JINKIS, THE FIRE OF A THOUSAND KIBUMS, THE WIND OF A THOUSAND JONGHYUNS, THE WATER OF A THOUSAND MINHOS, AND THE HEART OF A KAJILLION TAEMINS.

♥!!!!

Seriously, omg, this is precious beyond words and I have been spazzing out the entire time. The elements fit so wonderfully and Taemin is so precious and aaaaa OT5! ;A;

SO GEOLOGY

CONGRATULATIONS! Awesome awesome job (you are forever banned from saying you suck at writing), would read a billion times again.

I am so incoherent it's unfunny, but IDC I LOVE THIS AND I LOVE YOU!!!

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pinkweather April 26 2010, 15:22:07 UTC
wait wat i can't think of anything to top that - I LOVE YOU WAY MORE THAN ALL THE THINGS YOU MENTIONED COMBINED OKAY ♥♥♥♥♥ there. gdi it's getting late and my brain is incapable of coming up with witty shits rn ;_;

actually, this fic was inspired by a physics lesson, of all things.

thank youuuuu~! ♥ /ignores ban lalala~

if you loved it, that makes one of us, yay! also i love you more :DDD

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