[jongho] wish i was your lover

[pinkweather]

wish i was your lover
~6,500 words
Jongho, 2hyun, PG-13
summary: Jonghyun is horribly misguided about the proper rituals of courtship, and Minho frankly cannot take a hint. Desperate, Jonghyun turns to extreme methods…and what better way to make an impact than to pretend he’s going out with a Super Junior member?
a/n: for hyungdeul. nevar evar stop at z :<

Comments

I LOVE YOU

[hyungdeul]

oh my god. OH MY GOD. you don't know how much i screamed with joy when i saw this on my timeline. you are amazing, i don't even. really, if i could do this entire comment coherently, but in 64-pt. font and in a tacky blinking marquee of rainbow colors, i'd do it.

first, i love how you wrote jjongasaur! ♥ my heart leapt with joy pretty much everytime he opened his mouth and was all derp-derp in front of minho and exasperated with kibum and ~shy~ around kyuhyun. jongho and 2hyun are so adorable ♥

second, there were so many quotable quotes and hilarious scenes! i loled forever at kibum conspiring with jinki (and jinki having no choice but to agree) to fake an injury; i can so see them doing this.

"you’ve finally graduated from being a self-centered douche!”
lol omg key gets the best lines, dying

Siwon nods. “I asked my bible study group to pray for you.”oh, siwon. you would

I LOVE YOU MORE

[pinkweather]

OMG BIRHEN JONGYU FIC, SO ESSITED!!!1! *A* and yay, i'm glad you thought the kyuhae part turned out okay because i had no idea if i was butchering them already.

i love you too foreverrr, never stop writing ♥♥♥

Re: I LOVE YOU MORE

[hyungdeul]

i don't even know how birhen jongyu fic is supposed to go! :( see how much i love you, trudging through this dim path where i literally know nil about the rest of the way, uhuhu. anyway, if and when i finish it, you know where to look for it. 8D

you wrote kyuhae like i've always wanted to write them - funny and adorable! they always end up either angsty or sappy or porny in my hands. :(

and no, i totally love you more. ♥

no, I do <3

[pinkweather]

madz will light the way! :D all i want is for an ending where they will no longer be birhen anymore, ohohoho~ alsdkfaj will check obsessively for it every single day *_*

also that sadface is totes out of place :| i stan you and your kyuhae fic (+ everything else) sfm write moarrr ♥

[lunayeppeo]

OBNOXIOUS SPOT BECAUSE I HAVE TO EAT DINNER NOW PLEASE WAIT FOR ME OKAY? ;A;

[lunayeppeo]

Guh okay I feel really bad because i was supposed to flail and blabber incoherently about this but I forgot most of my thoughts after dinner and now I can only flail. :(

*flails at you*

JONGHYUN SO PRECIOUS. It must be the hardest thing ever to get Minho the hyungwhore's attention. JONGHYUN IS A HYUNG TOO. Jonghyun's so precious in trying to get Minho's attention, b'aaaawww. And Minho! Oh, Minho, I am still kind of bitter at you for tearing your muscle and not being able to do the Egyptian step, but you are darling enough here to make up for it.

I SAW THAT ONKEY

Okay, yes, I am delusional. DELUSIONAL WITH LOVE FOR YOU

NEVER STOP WRITING, OKAY? I miss you forever and look forward to every one of your works. Someday soon we will drag you from your school and go out and do dorky stuff! ;A;

I MISS YOU AND LOVE YOU

[pinkweather]

b'awww, you will be able to see the egyptian step in a live perf someday! minho promised! also, that onkey was intentional 8D well-spotted, oppar!

and oh god feel free to drag me away from school as you see fit. life gets bleak when you have to spend five hours every day in a room full of cadavers :< i miss you so much you don't even know! let's all go out again sometime ;_; ilu always! ♥

[lunayeppeo]

Huhuhu he'd better! Every time I see the step during their practice or in the MV, I want to cry. AND YAY I AM NOT THAT DELUSIONAL YET 8DDDDDD /rolls around in glee

If I had my way meaning if I knew how to commute to your school and I had the resources to, I'd drag you away every day. ;A; How's Javier doing, by the way?

I miss you every time I talk to you over the Internet! It's just not the saaaaaaaaaame. Let's go out soon! We have to! ILU alwaaaays mooooar ;____; ♥!♥!♥!

[shan_ah_non]

YOU ARE SO FUCKING AWESOME.
today was like my worst day ever, with all the heat and sun and my stupid coach got pissed off because we were apparently 'playing a fool'. and then i got maths remedial and found out i was last in class. and now, i just received news i gonna have two tests tml. /rambles on

And then you came along with this fic. Which is fucking FANTABULOUS, that i really really really want to give you a big hug and sloppy kisses. You totally made my day.

and i demand for a sequel for their sex scene. :3 pretty please?

[pinkweather]

i'm glad that reading this fic brightened up your bad day! :D thank you for the wonderful comment~ and haha, pwp fics don't agree with me so a sequel is probably not going to happen, sry :(

[engraved_16]

AHDSGFHGFHDGFHSFKJHGJDHGDHGHJKL;
THIS MADE MY DAY!!!

srsly fckn love this :)))
not for many reasons except it made me extremely happy, your wrote it well and...obvs coz its jongho ♥ :D

argh minho is sooo sneaky with his feelings, by not showing it until the end D: makes all of jonghyun's effort pretty useless if all he had to do was kiss him xDDD haha

Oh i liked how jonghyun was always hoping minho would react somehow, it made it feel realistic like what someone in real life would be feeling if they were doing the same kind of thing.

But damn i really wanted minho to be a little more jealous...or showed it more so i could've wibbled at the cuteness :333333 but of course, things always start to happen when the person gives up all hope...well not all but most i guess xD

LOVE THIS FIC ALOT!
thank you :)
♥♥♥
(memms yaay)

[pinkweather]

minho is very ninja about his feelings. he hides it most effectively behind his gratuitous interaction with his gajillion hyungs :D

thanks for the comment and the mem! i'm happy you enjoyed reading!

[pinkweather]

i adore cute-evil!taemin too much for my own good. and yeah, poor jonghyun :< but it is all okay in the end because the surprise hospital sex will cancel out all of his sufferings :DDD

thank youuu and i'm glad you had fun reading! ♥