[jongkey] (stay together) live forever

[pinkweather]

(stay together) live forever
Jonghyun/Key, PG-13, AU
summary: Choose your friends wisely.
warning: character death
a/n: yay for sem break! i’ve always wanted to write a fic that wasn’t…full of lulz…for once. thanks to lunayeppeo for reading this through for me ♥

Comments

[lunayeppeo]

You did such a great great job! I am so ridiculously proud of you idek. ;A; You pulled off horror really well! I was completely fooled! I love how you set everything up -- the atmosphere, the history, the build-up -- and just when you think everything is settled, the twist came in really nicely! I was completely thrown, it was amazing. I kind of feel silly for not seeing it, since there was something off about Taemin's actions for someone supposedly around to haunt and attack. But I guess that was what you were going for, so yay!

I just really love this and I love you rabidly. I spent a few seconds going "omg what happened" and then it hit me like a sledgehammer and you are so so amazing. ;A; /INSTA-FAVE ♥!!!!!

And NO. Thank you for letting me read through it! ;A;

[pinkweather]

eee i am so happy that you liked it! *A* at first i was like ;_; when you texted that you were going to scream at me uhuhuhu. and i'm relieved that you had all the reactions i wanted from the reader. i honestly had no idea if this was even remotely scary lol 8D

ilu ♥

and i'm still bored =_=

[lunayeppeo]

Noooooo I would never scream badly at you ilu ;A;

It has the kind of scary that isn't jump-at-you-from-the-screen, but the lingering kind of scary that creeps up on you the more you think about it. *U*

ILU2 ♥!!!

You should write more keke :333

[pinkweather]

yay ♥ your texts are always scary; you never use emoticons and that time it was all in caps. don't give me a heart attack like that ;_;

guh writing scary is hard; now that i've attempted it i can go back to my usual retarded lolz fare *_*

and you already got your wish :3

[pinkweather]

i was trying to go for that; i'm glad it worked for you, haha~ thank you so much for reading! :D

[lucidwolfe]

wow the fic got really eerie when taemin came into the story. i was almost convinced that jonghyun was the one with some dark secret/past but the ending came and blew me away.

i'm a pretty timid person when it comes to the horror genre and this is the only type i can take lols, it kinda slowly unsettles one from the inside out..

the taemin part of the story is still a little unclear to me though. i take it that he is a previous victim? so his appearances and those words he said, was he trying to save jonghyun?

before i forget of course, ♥♥♥ for this!

[pinkweather]

lol same; i easily get scared when watching horror movies. i am a wuss :( and yes, your assumptions about taemin were correct! but ghost!taem is still cute and wasn't very intimidating so key still won in the end anyway, baww. thank you for reading!

[piuupiu]

oh frick ^^ at first i thought jonghyun was dead because he rarely went out of the house.
but key being the dead one was just absolutely horrific! <3

[pinkweather]

haha~ thanks; i'm glad you enjoyed reading! :)

[saracupcaked]

I really enjoyed this! :D I guessed that Kibum was the ghost, but I thought he would be the lonely, quiet type instead of a vengeful one. Taemin's presence really threw me off, because I thought he was just envious of Jonghyun being the focus of Kibum's attention when he was actually trying to stop Kibum. There is hardly any dark!fic out there, and this is such a pleasant find.

Also, your last line: perfect ♥

[pinkweather]

lol i am enjoying reading the different interpretations for this fic :') i'm glad you had fun reading this! thank you for your insightful comment <3