like in mine, the anger at the end comes qwuickly, and i know as you act that, it will escalate, and that cant be seen on paper. slow it down a bit at the end, and dont go for thwe sterotypical screaming that you no longer believe, and end it. thats a trap. do yur emotional levels.. its awesome thoughh, im very impressed.
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like in mine, the anger at the end comes qwuickly, and i know as you act that, it will escalate, and that cant be seen on paper. slow it down a bit at the end, and dont go for thwe sterotypical screaming that you no longer believe, and end it. thats a trap. do yur emotional levels.. its awesome thoughh, im very impressed.
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