His Own Shadow

[pins_and_wheels]

Title: His Own Shadow - part II
Author: pins_and_wheels
Rating: PG-13 to NC-17
Warning: AU, dark, non-con, beta-less
Length: 40k and growing, 4k here
Pairing: Kai/Taemin (main), Key/Taemin, one-sided Minho/Taemin, Jinki/Taemin
Summary: Taemin loses a part of himself he doesn't know how to hold on to.

A/N: Part II, still shapeless - if anyone wants to tell

Comments

[taemint]

Oh wow, you probably don't understand how happy I am that you're still writing. I've read all the fics of yours I could find, a taekey and two ontae. I've despaired over the ontae verse (Lips don't lie) you created and teased about and then never published because you're a fantastic writer, and you're definitely an amazing smut writer so don't sell yourself short! I really mean it, ontae is my otp so I'm really picky about the fics but I love yours. I've recommended yours to everyone I know and they've all loved it too. ^^

I'm so interested in where this is going! I wonder if Kai is the part of himself that he's lost and so very curious as to which part that is exactly. And then there's the dream in the first part made me think he wasn't human. Then there's his sudden lack of grace, his delusions, the creepy part with his mother because that's never happened before, despite their closeness.

Oh and what do you want to know about lj? I don't see any problem with your posting so far. ^^

[pins_and_wheels]

thank you so much for saying such nice things! i'm pretty insecure about writing and posting, so comments mean a lot, but i always get really flustered by them :) but i really appreciate you taking the time to respond~
i'm flattered you remember those other fics, even though i'm still very iffy on my smut-writing abilities. i forgot about those corresponding fics to 'lips don't lie' - i wrote a few. i'll look them over and if they're decent i'll throw them online.
this story is getting more and more ontae as I work through the second half of it, so hopefully that will work for you :) next two parts offer some clarity, i think. but that only means there's less guesswork and more just like, general whatthefuck?

and okay, i'm glad the lj formatting isn't screwed up. i was pretty sure i was doing something wrong, but maybe it's in my head.

thanks again for the comment, really!

[silverxrainx]

Your writing style is perfect. Your story is perfect. The way you have with words is so captivating, Please update soon!

[pins_and_wheels]

ah nononono. not even in the realm of next to being almost halfway there to perfect...but thank you thank for enjoying the story! posting anything makes me obsess over all the ways i fall short in my writing and all the gaping holes in the story so it's really nice to hear that perhaps other people don't notice those problems as much.
thank you for commenting - i really appreciate it!
i'm going to update soon :)