i saw the pain in her loving eyes

[pinstripepride]

pain intertwines w/ pleasure
a marbled effect on my rational
ask if we're doomed or blessed
tonight it became Un-etched

discontent morphed from disbelief
the streets fog often raises
in ever-looping swirls
but tonight was too cold

and i find myself sinking back
back w/ the coroding asfault
that is too bold
ask without the tone of attack

Comments

[yawn_dawnpatrol]

"ask without the tone of attack"

nice doug.

[anonymous]

i.love.you.
love. me.