My attempt at a "dribble"

Oct 21, 2005 05:00

Young Pippin’s nose twitched with manifest delight, his belly rumbled
And his jam-sticky fingers crept across the table
Until the still steaming tart was securely captured
And he slipped beneath the table joyfully
He was unnoticed by the adults
Free to enjoy his prize
He took a bite
Chewed it carefully
Swallowed it
Smiling.

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ex_samarra October 21 2005, 14:44:32 UTC
hehehehehehe.....how sweet! (((((pippin)))))

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dreamflower02 October 21 2005, 15:30:32 UTC
Ah, Pippin! He does keep track of the *important* things in life! This is so cute--I can just see him, all sticky and sweet.

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lin4gondor October 21 2005, 16:13:47 UTC
Lovely! And now I am feeling quite hungry. Good thing it's lunch time, hehe!

((((You))))

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(((((PipKim))))) my_cocoon October 21 2005, 19:39:35 UTC
that is wonderful and sooo Pippin

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