Story Draft

[piratehall]

(the rules to the drinking game john and I made up later are on Rumor)
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She was late. And that was familiar and reassuring.
Jason turned the coins idly in his pocket, wondering whether they were heads or tails and their denomination.

-heads or tails relative to what?

The wind kicked up his coat and, his other hand preoccupied with the

Comments

[tzviadancer]

I think- this is only the beginning of a story- it either needs more, or a slightly different ending that gives a clearer direction of where things between these characters will go beyond the borders of this particular piece.

amidst this every permutation of his current situation he felt strangely detached, as though he would not become the person waiting for her until she had arrived.

I know this feeling so precisely that I have written pretty much exactly that sentence on multiple occasions.

By the way, I will be in New York City for 24 hours evening of March 23-March 24. Any chance we could get together?

[piratehall]

I would *love* to get together and catch up.