Tranformation (A Leverage Fanfic) Chapter 1

[piratekit]

Nathan Ford glared towards the door as his ‘escort’ departed, leaving him locked in the cell.  He looked over towards the small blonde where she sat pouting in the corner.

He moved to be nearby, sliding down the wall at her side. She had pulled her knees up to her chest, arms wrapped around her legs.

Three days. It had been three days since they

Comments

[lerah99]

Oh! This is creepy and heartbreaking and wonderful! I can't wait to see where you go next! Thank you so much for posting it!

[piratekit]

Ohh I love the icon. That is just adorable.

Glad you like the story so far! You are so welcome. Heartbreaking and creepy? Yay!! I succeeded in setting the tone I wanted then. It gets happier... before it gets worse for them.

Thanks so much for the review!

[elshadowboxer]

Well this is interesting! Very original. I have to admit you've got me hooked. I want to see what that little shot does to Nathan and what Eliot is going to do about it. Don't leave us hanging too long!

[piratekit]

Why thank you so very much. Coming from you especially, yay! I'm so glad you're enjoying it. I have to get the poor pair rescued as though Parker wasn't mentally screwed enough already. Oh Eliot is in chapter 2, have no worries and boy is he not happy. Oh then there is this cute little moment between them in chapter three that...

Opps, almost said too much.

Thanks for reading!

[piratekit]

Thanks! I'm so glad you are enjoying my little monstrosity here. I had to re-write a bit of chapter 2 but I hope to have it up sometime Sunday.

[blaidd_drwg]

My favorite thing about ch.1? The interplay between Parker and Nate. Love how paternal he can be towards her and how steadfastly loyal and caring she can be to him.

Those creepy military/scientists...I hope Eliot and Parker teach them a big ol' lesson before this story is over.

[piratekit]

Because you are just so awesome and took the time to comment on all the chapters I am going to see if I can't comment back to you on them all ;)

Ohh, don't worry. We will be seeing the creepy science squad again later in the story. *evil grin*

Glad you liked Parker/Nate! I just can't resist the idea of him going into Daddy mode around her now and again and parts of Season 2 only made that idea more addictive.

[fleurlb]

I'm late to the party, but am really interested in reading what happens next. I like the way you just drop us in the middle of the problem.

[piratekit]

Hey, better late then never! Especially when you are super sweet and comment on all the chapters. You are officially made of AWESOME!