Tranformation (A Leverage Fanfic) Chapter 2

[piratekit]

DISCLAIMER: I do not know nor have I at any point owned any thing associated with the show Leverage be it plot, characters or otherwise. This is for entertainment purposes only and I will not be making any fiscal profit whatsoever.

This is Chapter 2. If you somehow missed the beginning chapter 1 is here.

Please let me know what you think!

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Fire

Comments

[piratekit]

Well of course the others couldn't leave their thief and mastermind to suffer. Oh there is a fun surprise for Nate. He's just got to suffer a little more first.

Will have to wait and see just what happens.

Thanks for the review!

[lerah99]

I'm so glad you continued this! I'm on the edge of me seat. I have a feeling the real trouble is going to start when Nate wakes up.

For this part - Go Team!
I love your Hardison acting as a Col. He was just over the top enough to feel exactly like the Hardison we know and love.

Thank you so much for continuing to post. I can't wait until the next chapter.

[piratekit]

Oh edge of your seat! Now that's flattering. No worries there will be all kinds of trouble.

Yeah, I decided Hardison needed to save the day cause he's just great like that. Thanks for your input on his character. I'm still working on getting their voices down.

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks so much for reading! Chapter 3 should be soon.

[elshadowboxer]

You're Hardison had me rolling on the floor. Half chinese. *snorts* So dead on. And, I was very happy to see Eliot! Am very anxious to see where you go with this.

[piratekit]

Glad you liked my Hardison! I'm still working on finding the character's voices so it's good to know I have at least him down in one chapter.

Now you knew Eliot had to be there. He gets his own brand of angst thrown into this soon along with Nate's. The whole team's in for a ride.

Thanks for the review! Glad you enjoyed it.

[piratekit]

Hey! Thanks for catching my error there! It is now fixed.

Glad you like the story up to this point. Hope the other chapters keep you interested as well.

Thanks again!

[fleurlb]

Loved this chapter. Everyone was perfect, but especially the interaction between Hardison and Eliot.

[piratekit]

Hee! That is awesome to hear, you have no idea.

Yeah, those two are great in the show around one another so I was really trying to get their normal play time in and apparently I succeed. Score!

Thanks so much!