Tranformation (A Leverage Fanfic) Chapter 4

[piratekit]

“Man sometimes I even impress myself,” Hardison crooned. He was settled in a single chair with his laptop perched on a table less then an arm’s length away, a full bottle of orange soda right beside it and the clicker in his hand. He continued, “I mean seriously, do you guys have an idea how hard this stuff was to get into? I don’t think the

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[elshadowboxer]

Wait! What? No! You can't do that! No, no, no. It's not fair! Really, you're going to leave it there? =( Okay, but do we really have to wait until next Friday? Loving this! *Smishes Nate and Eliot*

[piratekit]

Mwhaha. Yes, I must leave it there! Call it payback for a few of your nail biting cliffhangers ;) . I'll try really hard to get the next chapter out before Friday but no promises *whistles innocently*

Thanks so much for the comment! Eliot and Nate need all the love they can get right now. I would pet on Eliot but I'm not so sure he'd take it well and I just so happen to value the use of my hand.

Speaking of updating I'm anxious to see where your Unnamed Series goes.

[elshadowboxer]

So this is what karma feels like. *sighs*

LOL! Well, I'll try to wait patiently. Eliot, be nice. No crippling the author! *gives him a stern look*

And I am working on the next piece, but I'm having problems getting Nate to behave. He is such a naughty boy!

BTW: I love your Nero Wolfe icon!

[piratekit]

Aw, you defended me from Eliot. That's so sweet *offers cyber cookies*

Nate misbehaving, tsk tsk. Naughty, naughty boy! No, behave. Remember focus is key. For some reason though I don't he cares.

Great, for some reason that gives me visuals of priest!Nate.

Thanks so much for the icon comment. Oh I adore Nero Wolfe! Great to see another fan. I have so many fic ideas for the series but so far I keep shying away from it.

*bouncing in anticipation of your next piece*

[faceted_mind]

I'm now envisaging this awesome frankenstein's monster moment, where Super-Nate is shocked into existance by the electricity. :D

Awesome fic

[piratekit]

Oh that is such a great visual! Now I want to shock him dang it *pouts* Oh well. We'll see what's happening soon.

Glad you are enjoying it! Thanks

[elshadowboxer]

Oh, I've tried so hard to be patient! When can we expect another update? Is Eliot getting out of hand? I'd help you wrangle him back into submission but I think Nate would get jealous.

[piratekit]

Lol, and I thank you so much for your patience. I got a little sidetracked with getting back into school *blushes* But the next two, yes two!, chapters are with my beta right now so I am just waiting on her.

Expect an update soon!

[blaidd_drwg]

Thank goodness there's more to read or I'd be tempted to drag out a pint of Ben & Jerry's to ease the ache of a cliff hanger. And a great one at that!

I've said it before, but it deserves saying again. You've really got a handle on the characters - how they act, think, talk. Kudos to you. :)

I'm really enjoying reading your story.

[piratekit]

Yeah you totally cheated... or did it right, lol. There are without a doubt certain benefits to reading something with a lot of chapters already up.

*does happy dance at character handle comment*

[fleurlb]

Oh noes....I'm glad now that I'm behind on the reading. Waiting for Chapter 5 might've done me in.