Transformation (A Leverage Fanfic) Chapter 6

Feb 07, 2010 09:01

Standard Disclaimer: I own nothing, period.

A/N: Sorry that this chapter is a little shorter than the others. I just needed it to stop where it did. The next one should be up soon after. My beta reader, while a wonderful person, is also a horrible corrupter who encourages plotbunnies and things are going to places I didn't quite originally expect. ( Read more... )

character: parker, leverage, character: nathan ford, slash, fanfiction

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elshadowboxer February 7 2010, 19:10:55 UTC
You are evil ;D. I understand the cliffhanger, however, at the same time I'm biting my lip in frustration!!!!

Oh, please update soon. I want to see Eliot's reaction, well, everyone's, but especially Eliot.

Great description of waking up in the cold box and the confusion and fear one would feel. Please hurry with the next update? *gives you puppy dog eyes*

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piratekit February 14 2010, 06:04:21 UTC
Mwhahah!! EVIL!! *coughs* You know that evil laugh is harder then it looks.

Eliot, Eliot, poor Eliot. That poor man is having such a rough time these days.

Thanks for that, the whole comment on the cold box thing I mean. I was worried about how that came across. Morgues are surprisingly hard to find details on.

Awww, now look at those eyes! How the devil am I supposed to resist that?

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faceted_mind February 7 2010, 21:30:45 UTC
ALIVE! IT'S ALIVE! Wow, watching Igor with my family this weekend really isn't helping the whole Frankenstein kick. :D So glad to see Nate not-dead. I eagerly await more. (*hugs Parker for good measure*)

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piratekit February 14 2010, 06:06:50 UTC
HE LIVES!! Aww, but Igor is kinda awesome and you aren't really that far off. Those scientists are just all kinds of nuts with what they put in people. Ironically as I am typing this reply, my IPOD is on random and flipped to 'Thriller'.

Aww, Parker needed a hug. She's so confused.

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blaidd_drwg February 9 2010, 10:58:31 UTC
Whew! When Nate woke up I thought the spook squad had simulated the heart stopping with a doctor on the inside (armed with a special injection and a description of Nate in case he showed up at any of the local emergency rooms) and had taken him back or were transporting him to a new base. I can't tell you what a relief it was to find he was in the hospital's morgue (and that he got out of the slab/wall unit).

Three cheers for him actually making it to the loft and Parker seeing him. Got a little chuckle over her thinking he was a strange man breaking in and her thought about Eliot knowing what to do. Aside from my great happiness in finding Nate alive after all was my glee in Parker and the coffee cup contemplation.

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piratekit February 14 2010, 06:11:08 UTC
Wow... that would have been really cool actually. *looks all thoughtful* But no, poor Nate has to recover a little mentally and have time for him to realize what's changed. *clears throat inconspicuously* This isn't the fic I drive him insane in.

He! You liked the coffee cup things? Yay! I was trying to figure out how she would be coping. It's hard to get into her head 98% of the time and somehow I couldn't see her reacting in the normal way.

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fleurlb February 23 2010, 20:54:28 UTC
Nate's waking up thought process was great. And I also like Parker's attempt to keep everything as it had been.

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