Comments | piratesmiley: The Probability

piratesmiley

The Probability

Mar 08, 2010 20:41

( you wanna fight for this love, but honey you cannot wrestle a dove, so baby it's clear )

Comments 7

mitashade March 9 2010, 04:12:02 UTC

Oooo I liked this so much. Very well written, and this is just ho I see them in me head about the whole thing, too.

Please please PLEASE add this to FringFic so I can favourite it there! XD

williwawz March 9 2010, 15:44:14 UTC

I enjoyed reading this story. It feels like the dynamic that Peter and Olivia are heading for right now in the show. Self medication with alcohol seems to be hinted at as being the coping mechanism of both those characters on the show and you integrate that very well.
Nice to see Olivia using that *other* talent of hers-you know it's gone to come up eventually!
Thanks for writing!

beautyandbanana March 9 2010, 20:19:18 UTC

"And in the morning they pretend it never happened."

I liked that line! It fit their characters really well!

marymc March 9 2010, 23:21:42 UTC

And in the morning they pretend it never happened.

Coz they haven't got a damned clue what's good for them. :P

Lovely fic.

twixbitch March 10 2010, 10:00:13 UTC

“You scared the crap out of me.”

Awwww! This was really perfect.

Also, I lol'd a lot at:

“Don’t freak out: I don’t think it hit anything.”

He is very obviously drunk, far drunker than usual. That’s a problem.

“You don’t think it hit anything? It hit you!”

I love drunk!Peter.