Prompt fic - Quincho

[pirateyes]

This was just supposed to be one of the long overdue prompt fics from my California trip. I wrote half of it a month ago and then procrastinated on the porn until today. BUT THEN everyone had to get all Quincho crazy on me and suddenly people were going to be reading it and ~expecting things and I cave under pressure like a weak, wilty flower.

So,

Comments

[perdiccas]

holy ever loving shit this is beautiful, and hot too but mostly just beautifully written. why do you not write porn more? you're so good at it; i feel personally affronted on behalf of the universe that you're denying us regular doses of your talent in this area.

“Do you want,” he says now, against the curve of John’s hip, because talking into John has always been easier than talking to him.
so many gorgeous lines but this was my favourite. And the ending was pitch perfect too; i'm caught between poor Zach! and Zach, you lucky son of a bitch. ♥

IN CONCLUSION: QUINCHO 4EVA!

[pirateyes]

Haha. We're starting a revolution of sorts. This fic was difficult to write for me, NGL. I find it harder to find a way around the canon for these two.

But thank you ever so much for this lovely comment. I'm so glad you liked it. And I love that you felt a bit of the conflict at the end. I wanted it to be a little uncertain exactly how Zach felt about the whole thing.

I'm going to try to write more porn. If only because it's a challenge.

[withthepilot]

Yessssss. Thank you so much for letting me have a read. This is great and it's so THEM. The end is so insides-twisty but makes so much sense, and that last line is swoonworthy.

I also love this: He’d excused himself but John had followed him to the change room and with knowing eyes pressed Zach against the hard, steel lockers, slid a hand into his shorts and jacked him off with sixteen strokes and wet heat on his collarbone.

The fact that even though John is taking him by surprise now, the first time was so good for Zach that he remembers every single detail.

Also, the line that Perdi quoted? Fantastic. I love good porn with a splash of good angst. Thank you for sharing this!

[pirateyes]

Wow, I'm so glad you liked it. I've never written John before so I'm happy he came off well.

Thank you so much for reading!

[pirateyes]

I'm so glad you got what I was trying to say with this. I can sometimes be overly vague, so the fact that you read the uncertainty exactly right makes me very happy.

I really can't decide if Zach will end up getting hurt or not, either. I'd like to think not, but that's just because I want him to be happy. *is lame*

I have no idea where this surge in Quincho love came from, but I'm assuming it's from the NYC twitter exchange. I find the dynamic interesting, mostly because I find the dynamic of Zach with anyone interesting :)

Thanks so much for the comment! You are lovely.

[babykid528]

First- I love you! :-D This is awesome!!!!!

I kinda forgot I prompted this, lol! So this really is a happy birthday surprise. XD

And OMG, my Quincho need is renewed full force. Your Cho and Zach voices are sooooooo sooooooooo perfect. John eating pizza is sexier than it has any real right to be. ;-) And OMG I ADORE the idea that Kerri gave him permission for this weekend! And the end, OMG the end!!! Poor Zach!!!! :-( It's so ridiculously hot and then it's got that stomach punch at the end. SO perfect!!! <333333333333

Thank you so much for writing this, bb! I will expect more from you now, of course. ;-)

[pirateyes]

Yay! I'm so glad you liked it. I'm totally not surprised you forgot about it. Late reply is late. But well timed?

I'm really happily surprised that people seem to like the voices because I thought they were a bit off, so that definitely makes my day to hear.

I hope this made your birthday a tiny bit better :)

[medea_fic]

This is some good Quincho! Yeah. I do like the way you've dealt with the canon issues. And it is impressively hot and porny. Really good, thank you for posting it. :)

[pirateyes]

Thank you! The canon is definitely a challenge, so I'm glad it worked for you. And porn is new to me so if I managed to make it hot then I'm stoked.