Comments | pirateyes: Fic: anomie (the social network, mark/eduardo)

pirateyes

Fic: anomie (the social network, mark/eduardo)

Nov 15, 2010 06:35

Title: anomie ( Read more... )

network of faces, fic, mark/eduardo, we like assholes in fandom, brella's bitch, mark z most lovable douchebag, wardooooooooooo

Comments 22

fledmusic November 15 2010, 20:59:24 UTC

Wow wow wow this is so good. Ugh, the way Eduardo says "Goodbye, Mark," after that whole discussion about goodbyes, AGHHHH MY HEART.

Mark doesn't think it's possible to age visibly in the span of six months. At least he hopes not, because otherwise he'll probably be victim to it too. And if he ages then they might stop ID-ing him at the liquor store down the road from his office and then they might stop noticing his name and then when they see his flip-flops and sweatshirt at 12am on a Tuesday in December the soft pity in their eyes will never turn to respect.

That is just. So fascinating, and I can see it so perfectly. It's so Mark. Perfect.

pirateyes November 17 2010, 08:48:31 UTC

!!!!!!! you are too kind.

These boys are ripping out and stomping all over my heart and when I think msybe, just maybe, I'm going to get away they make moony eyes at each other and I'm fucked once again.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting and being so very lovely.

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pirateyes November 17 2010, 08:45:13 UTC

THEY ARE TERRIBLE TERRIBLE PEOPLE WITH ABSOLUTELY NO REGARD FOR MY SOUL. I keep trying to get them together and they keep making it difficult.

Thanks for reading anyway, though :)

leopardchic79 November 16 2010, 03:11:43 UTC

Oh this was really great & appropriately angsty.

He turns and they both watch as the elevator falls the last two floors to the lobby. The doors start to open and Mark feels unexpectedly panicky, reaches a hand to do... something.

Really liked this. His last chance.

Great story!

pirateyes November 17 2010, 08:45:55 UTC

Thanks so much! I really appreciate the comment.

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in lieu of real reply then I will awkwardly mash fandoms and RL into an unintelligible blob pirateyes November 17 2010, 08:51:45 UTC

I LIKE THIS REVOLVING DOOR. IT'S EXCITING.

nikkikoala90 November 23 2010, 19:03:20 UTC

Oh, my. This was so sad. So heart-breaking. I love so many elements of this. Mark slowing typing Eduardo's name, THAT SAD KISS, THE ENDING. UGGHHH, my heart!

So very, very good job! Keep writing!

pirateyes November 27 2010, 23:51:45 UTC

I'm gonna try! I haven't been this inspired by a fandom in a long, long time.

Thank you for the lovely comment.